I love this story. I've already ready read it before and I still like it. Truthfully, its not that I think the fight scenes are boring. It's just that I skip them to get to the romance. Also I would love to read a romance story by you about a roboticised couple, that would be so cute like this story gone Wall-E. Just two people getting some control back and holding hands. ^u^

Wow, again. This story was great, with the same element of believability of the first. When I saw this, I was expecting something very, very different. During chapter 7, I realized just how far Metic has come. It's amazing, really. This entire series will never let me look at Metal the same way! You,
my friend, are a truly great writer. I enjoyed the series, with it's roller coaster of emotions, and look forward to whatever else you may write. I love the ending, by the way.

Once again, 10/10.

May your pencil stay sharp, Black-Flight of Deviantart

I wonder what all the people at Metic's office said...

Lovely little plot twist, good that Metic can be honest with Bunnie again too!
Nice to see Sniv finally pulling his socks up!

10 OUT OF 10
Love is the greatest strength...
and the ultimate downfall...

Over all I give a... 10 OUT OF 10! But I did like the ironic
idea of roboticizing Bunnie. Become what you hate…HA HA HA

10 out of 10 Life is good, but living in fear is not my idea of living

It was an excellent chapter. Nothing to be ashamed of.

10 out of 10

10 out of 10! You never sease to amaze me! I hope you never DO!

10 out of 10 poor Vespa... poor poor Vespa...

You never sease to amaze me... most writers with a talent for combat scenes lack finesse when it comes to writing soft romantic ones.
Even the talented ones tend towards a sudden crescendo of passion where a tenser "Slow Burn" scene would have been infinitly better... plus thats my personal preference.
Bunnies scene of self realisation in the hold could not have been written better, while bringing her to tears you brang a lump to my throat.
The same could be said of the confession of love between her and Metic... it could have been a short rushed sidenote, but instead it was so much more, both of them plumbed the depths of emotion WITHOUT I might add trying to sidestep the Mechanical/organic issue which is so tempting to sidestepthe issue with miraculus yet inplausable Robotic "upgrades" or quick Deus-Ex-Machina without really dealing with it in depth(A temptation even I have fall pray to in the past.)
Instead you made a main plot feature, and excelled in doing so, moving me to the verge of tears in doing so.

The spire fight is the best one yet, Vespa's fate and the demise of Mosif holding a cruel mirror to what might have become of Bunnie and Metic...
Vespa of course allowing for some fantastic oneliners between herself and Bunnie... repeated references to rabbits being ** set of the edge of Vespas character beautifully.

I do hate to sound Sycophantic but I really do have very little to complain about.

Yours applaudingly,
Devo

Nice fighting. I felt sorry for Mosif, a little...she really wasn't worth his affections.
Speaking of which...how exactly are Bunnie and Metic going to make something of their relationship?

10 OUT OF 10 No one ever committed suicide while reading a good book, but many have tried while trying to write one

10 OUT OF 10 Love will be Rewarded with Awkward Situations