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Anon
2009-11-15 . chapter 6
Wonderful journey that culminated to one epic battle! Though shame that Minato had to step in and use the 'win' button, but hey gotta show how badass he is right? Nice work as well as your proofreaders on the text for I found no noticeable errors as I read through the text. I hopefully expect more P3 stories from you!
PreseatheKitsune (VGCG)
2008-08-05 . chapter 6
... That's it. I have to start drawing fanart for your stories! XD They're too awesome to leave them without! >:3

This ending was great and how you showed the previous relationships from the other chapters... you are one of my megaten idols. *bows*
NeoChick
2008-08-04 . chapter 6
Epic indeed! THAT WAS AWESOME! I loved every minute of it, definately showed off every character relationship spectacularly. Thanks for writing this fantastic story and I look forward to reading more of your works.

Smiles,
Neo
NeoChick
2008-07-29 . chapter 5
Aww I thought that was really cute in that angsty hopelessness kind of way...if that makes any kind of sense. Anyway well written Character wise as always and I can't wait for this epic epilogue!

Smiles,
Neo
NeoChick
2008-07-19 . chapter 4
I was wondering how one with Koromaru might go since he doesn't talk but your descpitions really accurately portrayed his feelings. This also is a nice way to explain why Koromaru is the only one (besides MC) that doesn't get an upgrade. I liked the comparision between him and Shinjiro alot now that I think about it. ^^
Anyway good job and I'm looking forward to more. Yukari's turn! But with who?
PreseatheKitsune (VGCG)
2008-07-18 . chapter 4
Wow, Koromaru and Akihiko. I love how you portrayed them as warriors and they both are damn fine warriors. P: Koromaru's right in kicking Akihiko's **. He needed to be woken up and this would explain why Koromaru's persona needed no change. That dog always had his resolve and he's not letting another warrior fall. Can't wait for the next update~
Darkforce222
2008-07-18 . chapter 4
I've been enjoying this series quite a but, but never bothered to review until now. I, uh, don't exactly have an excuse for this, as this is consistently excellent. Definitely looking forward to what you do with the final two.
NeoChick
2008-06-27 . chapter 3
^_^ I really liked that one. Fuuka and Shinjiro would be an interesting pair. I always thought that they would have become pretty good friends after how much Fuuka worried about him all the time. This was a good way to show that development in her character. I'll be honest I'm not a big fan of Fuuka but this made me appeciate her alot more.

So who's next? Hmm I shall predict Akihiko and Yukari, that would odd since they have an odd friendship.

Smiles,
Neo
PreseatheKitsune (VGCG)
2008-06-26 . chapter 3
Merow! Sorry I didn't review on the last chapter. I was busy. Anyway, I enjoyed both of them!

Awe, Aigis helping Junpei try to get a girl, that's so nice of her and Fuuka helping Shinjiro awaken from his night attacks. You kept all of them in character. I bow to you dood... *bows*
NeoChick
2008-06-19 . chapter 2
lol I really liked that one alot. Aigis as a wingman...I never thought it possible but you managed to pull it off perfectly XD How I love Junpei and suprisingly Aigis too (since she isn't really my favorite in the game).

Even though it wasn't intended as a pairing piece I still think that this piece showed how cute that they would be together.

Can't wait for the next one!
Black Jackal
2008-06-18 . chapter 2
Absolute gold I have to say.
Exhile87
2008-06-18 . chapter 2
Oh dear, Aigis... acting like that... Picturing that is just too hilarious!! XD Thanks for this chapter; I've been feeling rather down and it just made my day. ^_^
Black Jackal
2008-06-17 . chapter 1
Incredible. I can't wait for more.
NeoChick
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
Aw that was so cute. Ken is so under appreciated in the Persona universe we need more Ken stories. The Mitsuru-Ken interactions were flawless in my opinion, I envy your ablitily to characterize so well.

Keep up the good work

Smiles,
NeoChick
PreseatheKitsune (VGCG)
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
I found it hilarious that both Ken and Mitsuru were like... "Do you wanna go on the swings?" "Uhm... do you?" They're both so mature that they try not to show that other side of them. Mitsuru didn't really experience all of the things in childhood and Ken is shutting himself away from it all. :3 Go Ms. Empress and Little Justice~! XD

Can't wait for the next chapter :3~
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