SQUE
if only it was cannon...

What a fabulous way to describe confidence! This breathes hope and optimism. Your drabble truly fits the prompt.

Love it that you had Angela gaping instead of squealing.

Thank you for making me smile :)

PS. Something has bitten you, you ought to have that looked at ;)

I liked how Booth wasn't worried about the guys that Brennan has been dating...that none of them were the real deal - that he was just waiting for Brennan to get 'this' out of her system & knowing that when the time was right & they were both ready...that he (Booth) would be the one who was going to be 'real' for Brennan.

Loved that Angela immedialtely picked up on Booth's intended meaning.
**“Not. One. Word.”
...he didn't want to spook Brennan & send her running...he was prepared to wait for her to catch up.

I am looking forward to your next longer literary piece. I prefer the multi-chapters & you do them so well. :-):-):-)

Great job!

Ah Margaret Atwood, one of our shining stars, although I've never been a huge fan. I really like what you did with that prompt.

I love the idea that Booth knows what's going to happen eventually.

Terrific chapter! Looking forward to your next story!

Leah

That was sad. Very well written. I'm always amazed at peopel who can write good drabbles - fitting so much meaning into so few words. You really are an excellent writer:)

Thank you,

Leah

That is an amazing episode.

I think you captured the idea of many different kinds of family: ‘Oh, she thinks I mean that kind of family.’ Poor Booth:)

Great job!

Leah

I have enjoyed this series. It was Lerdo who hooked me into drabbles so I'm happy to see you (temporarily, I hope) you close on one of her prompts. Kind of full circle for me.

Nice job with all of these but especially this one.

oh my... that was really good... even to shut up Angela for a bit... update soon...


HawkAngel

This one is actually very intriguing! But I love it so much. We all know that one day he will be the one :)
On another matter, I found out that my favourite drabble so far is "things", you wrote it with a strong emotion in the words, and it really thouched me.

WOW! These are REALLY good!! I really enjoyed reading these!
I hope you eventually start writting some more of them!
GREAT job!!
-D.C.

Ah Brilliant! My mouth dropped open and I squeed real proper stylee at the end of that!

Go on my Booth - you tell her! Just perfect last line...

*bows in awe*

And you've immediately done another one I like.

There is a lot of nascent promise in this piece. Angela baiting Booth with the information that Brennan is dating again, Booth blowing it off until this line: Booth smiles; nods, with conviction. “Yeah, he will.” -- Clearly, Booth is telling her that he intends to be the one guy who will be real for Brennan.

And I liked the way that it ended. "Not. One. Word." Angela is to say nothing to Brennan and let Booth make his move when the time is right. Perfect! As I said, there is just so much promise in this piece...

But I'm also very excited about the longer piece you've got in mind. As I've said before, most of these drabbles just don't grab me, so the idea of a longer piece intrigues me. Looking forward to it!

Absolutely, positively Booth! I can just see the expression on his face as leans in to Angela and declares his intention.

Hi there,

Loved, loved this...his confidence in Angela...he had just admitted everything to her...that he would be 'that one real guy' for Temperance Brennan..."Not one word"...loved it...

Ger

Hi there,

Oh but this is just so sad..."She is just an empty shell" just like her old home...all her favourite and most prescious things squashed into a garbage bag and she hoping that the bag would not burst...this is just so well put and so poignant...loved it...

Ger