This story seems very interesting and I like where it's going, just in the first chapter. Your use of characters is amazing and gripping as well. I'm definitely putting on alert for this story. =]
I liked it. I hate Mrs. Lovett, so it gave me a warm fuzzy feeling inside when the three ocs bitched at her. Sweeney was so nice to Lizzy, even though I personally think that she was avoding him because she was *swooning* for him, but that's just my own opinion. Bottom line, keep going and update soon.
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