really like it! sounds just like alice =))

that was lovely ;D the wording is perfect: ' it dirties her dresses something awful.' 'we’re s’posed to use it in a sentence whenever we can.' 'kind of by default.' makes it so real :D
love this! ;)
anie.

THis was fantastic! I loved the language, and the character of Mary Alice. How she calls her...visions "pictures" and thinks they aren't bad (but still doesn't tell) and how she's impatient, and the characters of Lucy and Cindy, that seem so real, even thru someone else. Fantastic job, I LOVED this!!

Wow, I like it.
Interesting to see a story from human Alice's POV.