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quicksilver2402004
2008-09-10 . chapter 1
That was a well written and awesome story!! Good job.
sonofwolf
2008-08-24 . chapter 1
Awesome sauce. On spaghetti. With meatballs and cheese.
TaintedTamer
2008-08-24 . chapter 1
Nice - I really liked this, especially with how you slipped Hotshot and Mirage in there. :D Great job!
lydiaroseonwingsofsong
2008-06-25 . chapter 1
Wow. Weird. But still very good. This is actually one pairing that has never crossed my mind before. I was waiting all the way through it for the good part.
Soggy Phoenix
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
This fic is amazing. Usually I merely ghost and don't reply--Which I should stop doing--but this fic warrants a reply. It is most likely one of the best fics in this fandom, and certainly the best Animated fic that I have seen as of yet. And especially how you took a pairing that most no one would think of and made it work so well...

I really can't find anything wrong with this, and I absolutely love the characterizations and past events, and the hints as to why Magnus doesn't get rid of Sentinel. Two of my favorite Animated characters portrayed so well that not even the canon writers write the characters as canon.

I am in envy of this fic, and of your talent.
HitokiriKurisuta
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
'You are young, Sentinel Prime, and as I remarked before, I have never seen a true war.'
This line was just above the 3rd break. I think the last "I" is supposed to be a "you". Just thought I'd mention it. ^^;

There were a couple other minor typos. Lemme know if you want me to point 'em out...

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Hm...Once again you have put ideas in my head for a pairing I hadn't seen before. While I find Ultra Magnus somewhat boring on his own, and Sentinel rather irritating, I quite enjoyed this pairing. Oddly enough. O.o

I shall have to ponder further on the effects of putting two normally (in my opinion) boring characters together in order to make them interesting. XD
Michelle
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
Okay. I LOVE your fanfiction. This of course is the first story of yours that I've ever given a review. But I LOVED it. Really. This pairing has never crossed my mind but WOW! I love how in character Sentinel and Ultra Magnus were. I want more of these two now that you've written them so wondefully! Anyway great story and keep up the great work! I love all of your stories! : )
EnVyS pEt NeKo2
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
This. was. AMAZING! I just loved how you still kept them in character but at the same time made me love them even more xD I cant stand Sentinel in the show, but in fanfiction he's awesome~
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