Reviews for Protective Coloration

sodarkangel 2008-08-29 ch 1,	abusethis one made me laugh. I’m not a pygmy. I prefer to think of myself as compact. right... and then the whole "boinking" thing... well. Gotta say, this was one of your happier-innocenter fics. I´m still shuddering when I imagine the house of pain.
DarkenedPetals 2008-06-23 ch 1,	abuseHaha! Absolutely brilliant!! "I prefer to think of myself as compact. A lot of man in a convenient package" < great stuff! and the Barthello bit - very nice (if you can call it that!) Loved it!
krimson.knight 2008-06-20 ch 1,	abuseIf I could describe this piece with a single emotion, it would be this face: :0 So THAT'S the real reason for Dona and Barthello's fight! Haha, just kidding. I'm slightly disturbed. Mostly because I wasn't expecting a Dona/Nooj sort of thing. I thoroughly enjoyed the dialogue between Nooj and Gippal the whole way. I had to hold back a few unladylike snorts. Thankfully for Nooj, the commsphere cut off at just the right time. ;)
heaven-monument 2008-06-18 ch 1,	abusejawdrop Nooj. And... Dona. And... BARTHELLO? Oh dear sweet God. Please, oh dear God PLEASE step AWAY from your computer, that was... oh my God. I... am speechless. “You’re boinking Barthello, too?” Gippal’s eye got rounder.
Mandy I Am 2008-06-14 ch 1,	abuseNooj and Dona? Now that is something very new! The fact that you had Nooj say "boinking" made me giggle. I love Gippal's reaction and love it even more when Barthello is mentioned. Heh!