 Fanfiction Fanatiction 2009-11-28 . chapter 24Aww... this chapter... was so cute!!
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 4EvEr-sistersgrimm-LoVeR 2009-11-25 . chapter 18aww so much fluff ! |
 4EvEr-sistersgrimm-LoVeR 2009-11-25 . chapter 15ohmygosh this was like so awesome !! tlk about bluntness though! |
 4EvEr-sistersgrimm-LoVeR 2009-11-25 . chapter 13KAWAI! aw that was so sweet i totally loved it |
 jokerstrikesback 2009-11-20 . chapter 23naw. YOU are the genius for thinking this up. :D
i was expecting yuki to not sleep, but standing there to beat kakeru up, but i think ur ending is much better. |
 4EvEr-sistersgrimm-LoVeR 2009-11-17 . chapter 9aw thats so cute! |
 LOTRjunkie6 2009-11-15 . chapter 23(n.n) kakeru manabe's so evil. he's such an awesome character |
 Ibuberu 2009-11-14 . chapter 23Oh, you're very welcome, Skoozyy (: Anyway, firstly, I'm going to have to say that the title for this chapter is very fitting XD Kakeru's definitely one who loves to matchmake Yuki and Machi together, and his plan here is really believable and I can totally imagine it being canon. The twist I loved here was that Yuki wasn't in the classroom, yet you still managed to pull off Yuki/Machi lovey-dovey cuteness. You're really good with this.
The ending was great, nuff' said. |
 Fanfiction Fanatiction 2009-11-14 . chapter 23I liked this chapter a lot. :)
Chapters with Kakeru is so much fun. =D |
 Ibuberu 2009-11-10 . chapter 21This is awesome (: I've always liked Machi and Yuki as a pairing. I haven't touched Furuba since it ended, so this is a refreshing read for me. Your writing style is wonderful, and you've got Machi and Yuki just about perfect in this. Lovely.
Personally, I love Endings, Whistling Down The Street and Note. Note was awesome, the letter Machi wrote was perfect - just perfect. Oh, and Explosion was very funny too (and its ending was too sweet! XD) Anything with Kakeru mentioned/participating in is funny, actually. I like how you've managed to make him exude that bubbly and comedic personality of his, like in the manga (: And you had Ayame so in character in WDTS, its scary!
For the most recent one on Angel, I'm glad that you wrote from Nao's POV. He's a great character with a whole lot of attitude and personality. You can't help but feel sad for his unrequited love ;; I like how you captured that in this one shot. Though one question I need to ask is that won't Yuki turn into a rat if he's cuddling Machi in his arms? Since somewhere in Angel, Nao mentioned that Motoko hadn't graduated yet - I think the curse was lifted sometime before/after Yuki graudated, right? It could just be my fail!memory of Furuba, please correct me if I'm wrong XD;
Other than that, outstanding work. Can't wait to see more. |
 4EvEr-sistersgrimm-LoVeR 2009-11-10 . chapter 6aw how sweet ! |
 Geoduck 2009-11-06 . chapter 22A bit of a surprise (but a pleasant one) to see a Naohito appearance. Really well-characterized. This continues to be one of my favorite ongoing Furuba stories. |
 Sandra Chang 2009-11-05 . chapter 22I'm jumping up and down, Nao's in here! Nao! His reasoning for Yuki to get a girlfriend is really good. Also, I love that it's implied that Nao is secretly a romantic at heart. I can just imagine Machi getting an anonymous present from Nao, and going what the hell?
I got confused over "They never had done before⦠" What does that mean? Can you use the find to search for it?
The ending line is total win. It summarizes everything so nicely. |
 LOTRjunkie6 2009-11-04 . chapter 15You should write a sequel to "Note". |
 Sandra Chang 2009-10-25 . chapter 21Kakeru's present just made my day. The idea was epic. Actually, the whole thing was epic. I can't believe I think of stupid ideas like Yuki getting hair extensions but I don't think of 'getting a birthday present'. You write the Student Council so well, they don't come off as crazy as when I write them. But poor Nao keeps getting cut out... he needs to be in the spotlight for one of the stories... OK, so I wanted to say that it got a little long at the end; you could have wrapped it up neater, with more of your amazing Machi-angst. I read it with so much admiration. |