Hello! I'm finally reading the challenge entries. This was a nice sweet little love story, and you incorporated the orange theme well. I don't really know what else to say, nothing to critique or anything, I quite liked it! I was very afraid there wouldn't be a happy ending for Ren, but there was =)

Oh. My. Muse. I would like to start off with my exclamation of joy, as opposed to the usual "I have never heard of Shaman King, I have never seen or read Shaman King, I never will nor wish to see Shaman King, and that doesn't matter because this was totally awesome" first line.

Wow. This was rather... epic. Once this is over, divide into chapters, por favor? But let me tell you, I loved it! Emotion, passion, nice and long, doesn't require too much prior knowledge, not a whole lot of Japanese, so much sap I could pour the extra on my pancakes... all in all, a great story. And it was a Romance - bonus!! I loved it!

--SMARTALIENQT :)

Wow! This is kind of overwhelming at times but overall very orange. Well-done! Really like the way you weaved the colour orange into it and I'm happy that I'm no longer with the longest one-shot here:-)

Miarath

What's so bad about epic one-shots? ~_~

Let's see, this is about where I ought to be leaving a witty, charming review about how much I liked the story, how well-presented I thought Ren, Horohoro, and everyone else were, and so forth and so on. Unfortunately, I've been rendered completely speechless by the quality of this story.

Really. ~_~

Good job!