fantastic.
I wish I was just starting to read it now... It was so brilliant. It's going into my faves as so many of your stories seem to be these days!! Tessa x

This is a great Jackie fic. You've really done a good job showing her feelings and there is just enough humor to lighten it. I had to snerk at the 900-year-old alien line.

Guh.

You made me cry!

That was absolutly beautiful! I even muttered "beautiful" aloud after I'd finished this. It was just so tender and subtle!

LOVE.

beautifully written. Could totally see something like that happening, not completely obvious and in the background but still there. Loved it :-)

"He clearly adores Rose as much as he ever did." Aww! He so does.

"but sometimes she wishes he’d just get it over with, swallow his stupid pride and make her daughter completely happy." DAMN YOU DOCTOR. We ALL wish that!

"Jackie is left hanging, waiting, waiting to know that they’re safe." That sums up how Jackie is completely I think. She's the one who suffers the worst from Rose travelling.

"He doesn’t make her take the coat off until morning" *wibbles*

"Jackie tries not to think about the cause of this change in attitude." LOL. We ALL know what they've been doing...

"They can’t be a couple. They don’t even fight." LMAO.

You have actually killed me with this. It's lovely, it really, really is.

Wonderful :)

Darn Doomsday!

That was absolutely enchanting. So beautiful, so cute, nice not to have screaming/slapping Jackie, and the last scene brought tears to my eyes. Brilliant.

I saw the title of this and grinned. Because I love an outsider's perspective on DoctorRose, me. (Especially when done by you.)
And this was lovely. Exactly right. I feel all squeeful, in a warm and cuddly way. Thank you, twas much appreciated. :D

aahh that was well good!
so cute!
loved it:D
xox

She's back! Saturday! Rave!

Loved it, loved it, loved it. Lots. Like jelly tots!

Ho hum, write some more soon!

Beth

Aw, that was so sweet!

Aww this is so sweet! Amazing, loved the story from Jackie's view! xx

I love Jackie's view on their relationship and I like how you have added in different bits that we never see but we know that they happen. Great job!!

That's a beautiful story - well done!

That was very good. Thanks for writing it. :-)