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Reviews for: A Relationship Developing
Amanda Fair
2009-02-18 . chapter 1
I NEVER read DBZ but I like Vegeta well enough (even if I don't like the show) and decided to read this. AWESOME! I love it! It was so realistically written, sweet, funny, and at the end, touching. I love how she woke up only when he said her name. Brilliant! Nice job! (:
Punk not dead
2008-06-23 . chapter 1
keep on writting!, I just love this couple.
USSj1SupaJay
2008-06-19 . chapter 1
Nice story.i didnt think vegeta could feel but i guess i was proved wrong
marie67
2008-06-17 . chapter 1
*_* it is beautiful ! I love it ! ^^
I-Love-Trunks1
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
That was really good! sweet too. It was a great story!
Apolonia86
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
Every story you create is wonderful... and this one was excellent, I really love VxB stories, and this one was SO nice and cute... ah! I think on every chapter you upload, I love you more.

Thanks for this beautiful gift.

zillion hugs for you!

Tammy
IfLooksCouldKill
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
The idea is great. I really liked your story. Vegeta is a little ooc, but thats ok. The only thing I really had a hard time with was the tense of the story. You switched between past and present tense a lot. Try and keep it all in one tense; that makes it an easier read. Other than that great job!
BlueCapricorn
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
Another great short story! I just love good short stories like this one.
Nice Job!
-smallbluecapricorn
KidGoku13
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
OMG SO TOUCHING! This is the BEST BulmaXVegeta fic I've ever read! Faved and re-read 20 times! XD

Gagawop Wuvs Yu!
-Kid Goku 13
The-Saiyan-From-Hyrule
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
AH! The fluff, it BURNS!! Hah hah, I'm only teasing! :p
VegetaXBulma isn't really one of my most favorite pairs, but me thinks me wants to read another one of these someday!

This was my kind of pairing fic. Nothing bad in it, and none of the nauseating romantic fluff. I loves it!
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