great...wish there was more!

hey,

ok this review comes a little late but i just read the beginning of your story. i really like the start. But you konw a little more would be nice maybe you have some time and ideas to update.
would like it

thanks^^

CONTINUE IT PLEASE! i loved the first chapter!

sigh!
i feel so bad for her!! i mean shes got the coolest parents in the world and she cant tell them waht happened?

in other words, i loved chapter one!

You are making light of a terrible situation. Your grammar is in need of help and there is no decent characterisation. Good on you if you want to practise your English, but you would be better off starting with subjects you know well.

This was good. I always liked the show and I am enjoying them as parents. I hate that Evelyn washed away the evidence they needed that DNA to put that guy away. Is Greg till a DA? I hope you continue with this.