cute!,i loved the ending,"there was no knife and the scones were on the counter before you came in" LOL

aww, that was cute, i like how there were 2 povs.

omg..it's so hard to find a shikixichijou fanfic..but im so happy i read this one! aw..they didnt fudge..but it was good that they did what they did. Super hot scenes and description..keep on the good work! I loved it!

oic...tsk tsk tsk..sly takuma..planned this whole thing to seduce shiki...muahahah...
i liked it..the whole plot..hehe..
thnx for writing~~it was great.. ^_^

ok..i understood the 1st chapter better after reading the 2nd chapter..

erm..i dun really understand the last part..
shiki put the knife there?ichijou cut his hand accidentally?shiki had a "tell tale wet spot"?which is wat>?meaning wat>?

You...you should've warned me...
wow...

Holy crap, this is amazing!

Wow, Takuma planned this didn't he? I loved it.

Lol, how cute^^

O.o Just got into watching Vampire Knight. It's filled with so much smexy boys that stuff like this is just bound to happen!(I hope!) Really HOT! *turns up fan* and this is 'Lover of Brownies' just incase you'd like to know. (didn't feel like logging in sorry -.-) This story was so...so...ARG! *runs for tissue to stop nosebleed*

It was great! And that last part with Takuma faking that cut from the knife! Sneaky bastard! Hope to read more of your stuff! Peace out...

:P I think I like this pairing.

The best part of reading this chapter is knowing that there's no cliffie at the end - sorry, my bad! Was too distracted in Chap 1 but happily so...

I like the subtle time reference you put in. Your writing makes everything seem like it happened in slow motion but the time factor thing made it urgent, it's cool! ... or should I say hot! *fans self again*

And that soft little sound Shiki made... *slides in chair, half melted*

OMG, when you said downstairs, it suddenly hit me, in the way the words fridge and grandfather's clock didn't - they weren't in their room, and the Night Class would awaken soon... gosh, the sheer deliciousness of it! *swoons*

And here's the softness again - 'they stayed gentle and kind', gosh, it suits this pair so well!

And Takuma swallowed Shiki's evidence ... then Shiki licked off Takuma's *eyes glaze over, cannot breathe properly*

Aw... the revelation at the end was so cute *chuckles away happily* I can just imagine Shiki's expression!

But overall, it was lovely... your yaoi is unbelievably sweet. Please, write more!

*YenGirl looks down at shirt, sighs & makes note never to read Carapheonix fics again without paper towels in place*

This fic is seriously hot! *fans face distractedly, eyeballs glued to screen*

Gosh, when Takuma touched Shiki through his pants... *swallows and starts nose bleeding*

I just liked this line 'Three inches taller than necessary' It said that Takuma is taller than Shiki by 3 inches which left one wishing it wasn't the case, and it said it so ... precisely.

But the best part of this chapter is the tone - so soft, sweet and gentle... like how Takuma is, really :) As is the fact that there is no dominance here, just sweet, sweet giving...

Oh crap...! *hits the Submit button, claps hand over bleeding nose & scurries off to washroom*

Oh MAN! *fans hot face vigorously* Poor Shiki, so attracted to sweet Takuma... c'mon Takuma, you can smell it, right? You can feel it, right? Don't act all innocent here... :) But I like how you made him the.. uhm.. domestic one? :)

And a CLIFFIE! You stopped at a cliffie! Aagh... *YenGirl pounds desk in frustration* Continue, please!!