 inkypinkyanna 2008-08-17 . chapter 11thank u! btw.. wot u calling it? keep it simple for my simple mind pwetty pwease |
 inkypinkyanna 2008-08-09 . chapter 10 omg... that was a brilliant way to end a story... i've got a couple and they are like just getting to the suspense level, bu ti was wondering could u give me a clue on how to finish them... i dont want to look like a copy cat by using urs... pretty please |
 Shamrocknewsie 2008-07-29 . chapter 10This was amazing as i thought it would be! Maybe you should write a sequel!
Vampires Forever,
SHAMROCKNEWSIE |
 Coconuts! 2008-07-29 . chapter 10 I loved it! it was wonderful! hey i would write more but i have to go get ready for work! sorry! see you soon! |
 HollyRosalie 2008-07-29 . chapter 10I love it! |
 cullenist1918 2008-07-28 . chapter 10NO! THIS CANT BE THE LAST CHAPTER!
in this chapter youve created-knowingly or otherwise-even more to add to the plot of this story!
write about the funeral
how bella has to stay home-who stays home with her (edward?) charlie's reaction to the cullens when he sees them again
their experience living with the Denali clan
Tanya's always had a crush on edward
how will her jealousy play out in front of him and bella?
any unexpected visits?
and TONS of EXB FLUFF!
besides-this is one of my all time fave fanfics (and that's SAYING something) you can't stop NOW! |
 vampirechick123 2008-07-28 . chapter 10really really liked that. poor charlie and jacob though.
:(
great job.
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 bella almost cullen 2008-07-27 . chapter 10oh.
-sob-
are you going to write a sequel??
please?? pretty, pretty, please with sugar on top and a pretty pink bow!?
please... if not for me, then the fan population of the world??
(xDD)
lool. it was an excellent story; i enjoyed it very muchh.
looll
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please keep writing! |
 Ember.Jane 2008-07-27 . chapter 10that was really good. i loved the ending. thought i think you should have made it a little deeper-but the idea of it was good. |
 MoonlessNight27727 2008-07-27 . chapter 10that was a cute ending...im glad everyone was okay |
 The.Lion's.Only.Lamb 2008-07-27 . chapter 10OMG that is so sweet i loved it |
 HorsecrazyJr. 2008-07-27 . chapter 10aw... this was a great story. I'll miss your updates, but I like the ending tho. |
 mammamia 2008-07-27 . chapter 10 That was wonderful! I love happy endings. You are the best ever. Find your own ideas and write. You have potential girl. |
 mammamia 2008-07-24 . chapter 9 Unbelievable. Your stories are very good. Thanks for sharing your version. |
 bella almost cullen 2008-07-21 . chapter 9oh. don't finish!
i love this story, its so good! |