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inkypinkyanna
2008-08-17 . chapter 11
thank u! btw.. wot u calling it? keep it simple for my simple mind pwetty pwease
inkypinkyanna
2008-08-09 . chapter 10
omg... that was a brilliant way to end a story... i've got a couple and they are like just getting to the suspense level, bu ti was wondering could u give me a clue on how to finish them... i dont want to look like a copy cat by using urs... pretty please
Shamrocknewsie
2008-07-29 . chapter 10
This was amazing as i thought it would be! Maybe you should write a sequel!
Vampires Forever,
SHAMROCKNEWSIE
Coconuts!
2008-07-29 . chapter 10
I loved it! it was wonderful! hey i would write more but i have to go get ready for work! sorry! see you soon!
HollyRosalie
2008-07-29 . chapter 10
I love it!
cullenist1918
2008-07-28 . chapter 10
NO! THIS CANT BE THE LAST CHAPTER!
in this chapter youve created-knowingly or otherwise-even more to add to the plot of this story!
write about the funeral
how bella has to stay home-who stays home with her (edward?) charlie's reaction to the cullens when he sees them again
their experience living with the Denali clan
Tanya's always had a crush on edward
how will her jealousy play out in front of him and bella?
any unexpected visits?
and TONS of EXB FLUFF!
besides-this is one of my all time fave fanfics (and that's SAYING something) you can't stop NOW!
vampirechick123
2008-07-28 . chapter 10
really really liked that. poor charlie and jacob though.

:(

great job.

bella almost cullen
2008-07-27 . chapter 10
oh.
-sob-
are you going to write a sequel??
please?? pretty, pretty, please with sugar on top and a pretty pink bow!?



please... if not for me, then the fan population of the world??
(xDD)
lool. it was an excellent story; i enjoyed it very muchh.
looll
=>
please keep writing!
Ember.Jane
2008-07-27 . chapter 10
that was really good. i loved the ending. thought i think you should have made it a little deeper-but the idea of it was good.
MoonlessNight27727
2008-07-27 . chapter 10
that was a cute ending...im glad everyone was okay
The.Lion's.Only.Lamb
2008-07-27 . chapter 10
OMG that is so sweet i loved it
HorsecrazyJr.
2008-07-27 . chapter 10
aw... this was a great story. I'll miss your updates, but I like the ending tho.
mammamia
2008-07-27 . chapter 10
That was wonderful! I love happy endings. You are the best ever. Find your own ideas and write. You have potential girl.
mammamia
2008-07-24 . chapter 9
Unbelievable. Your stories are very good. Thanks for sharing your version.
bella almost cullen
2008-07-21 . chapter 9
oh. don't finish!
i love this story, its so good!
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