thank u! btw.. wot u calling it? keep it simple for my simple mind pwetty pwease

omg... that was a brilliant way to end a story... i've got a couple and they are like just getting to the suspense level, bu ti was wondering could u give me a clue on how to finish them... i dont want to look like a copy cat by using urs... pretty please

This was amazing as i thought it would be! Maybe you should write a sequel!

Vampires Forever,

SHAMROCKNEWSIE

I loved it! it was wonderful! hey i would write more but i have to go get ready for work! sorry! see you soon!

I love it!

NO! THIS CANT BE THE LAST CHAPTER!

in this chapter youve created-knowingly or otherwise-even more to add to the plot of this story!

write about the funeral

how bella has to stay home-who stays home with her (edward?) charlie's reaction to the cullens when he sees them again

their experience living with the Denali clan

Tanya's always had a crush on edward

how will her jealousy play out in front of him and bella?

any unexpected visits?

and TONS of EXB FLUFF!

besides-this is one of my all time fave fanfics (and that's SAYING something) you can't stop NOW!

really really liked that. poor charlie and jacob though.

:(

great job.

oh.

-sob-

are you going to write a sequel?

please? pretty, pretty, please with sugar on top and a pretty pink bow!

please... if not for me, then the fan population of the world?

(xDD)

lool. it was an excellent story; i enjoyed it very muchh.

looll

please keep writing!

that was really good. i loved the ending. thought i think you should have made it a little deeper-but the idea of it was good.

that was a cute ending...im glad everyone was okay

OMG that is so sweet i loved it

aw... this was a great story. I'll miss your updates, but I like the ending tho.

That was wonderful! I love happy endings. You are the best ever. Find your own ideas and write. You have potential girl.

Unbelievable. Your stories are very good. Thanks for sharing your version.

oh. don't finish!

i love this story, its so good!