Keep writing!

Please I liked thi

Hey babe that was kickin' ! freaky, but still kickin' ! read my article in the school paper? Now that I have your attention... I tried calling you! Well, this story is sad and you need to continue... ok? L8a!

ooh dark

Yes, please do continue! I'd love to see the other's thoughts on this especially after what Dai did... Great fic!

geez, that was really abrupt and shocking. that's not to say that i disliked it or that it was bad, but i don't really know what to think about it. i think i'm in shock slightly...

Aside from some typos, there's one glaring error: Ken's a martial artist. Gang or no gang, Ken should have judo-flipped a few of these clowns. Now, I understand the Dark Seed/Spore factor, but...martial arts was still learned by Ken, so he should still know how to defend himself. * And a question: how exactly is Stingmon taking the death of his human partner? I'd imagine the deadly bug to be highly pissed-bordering homicidal, yet we're treated to a Daisuke suicide instead. * You have an interesting angst angle, but I'd add in the digimon as well as the Chosen here. Especially Wormmon/Stingmon. * - ACSound

this is sad..pwoor old ken..and daisukeeeeee... want more!NOW!

*Sniffle*