I think I'm going to cry. That was beautiful and tragic all in one go. You wrote it in such a way that it's so hard to hate Keisuke for what his doing and so easy to resent Ryousuke for not showing Takumi he cared. Gosh! I just wanted to reach through my computer screen and give Ryousuke a hard shake to make him realise what was going on. You feel sorry for all three of them. Beautiful writing. Can't wait to read what you come out with next.

Wow. Just wow. I can truly say that my writing is nothing compared to a masterpiece like this. You have all the elements that make the perfect PWP but yet, it does not read like one at all. More of an epic battle of words beautifully blended together to give the taste of sex but yet it is not tactless and disgustingly cliche as many writers will do. It is a work of art that makes your heart race till the very end. Begging that Takumi will escape only to reach that point and have his shattered once again leaving him broken. I can feel his sorrow inside, enough to make me want to curl up in a ball under my blankets and cry myself to sleep. I am spellbound.