This is sweet. Just like Napolean and Pedro-I can totally see them doing this. Great, funny dialogue, "Heck yeah, the must have come at night and stolen everything...I bet we could of handed them in and got a big reward," with Pedro being warm and sincere and Napolean being typical duh-face. Cool imagery, too! 'haloed by the light of the sun and his still short hair' Excellent spelling, grammar, paragraphing, and pretty much everything! I really enjoyed this fic. Thanks for writing and posting!

...wah?

Very ND-ish.

Napoleon Dynamite rocks.

I actually liked it.

haha