 RebleQueen 2008-12-11 . chapter 2Wow, I just found this story and I must say, it is very interesting. I know real life can intrude on one's creativity, but I hope to see an update soon. |
 Loraya 2008-07-30 . chapter 2Hm... Interesting...
I hope you continue. I like where it's going. |
 Avecia 2008-06-24 . chapter 2“So…do any of you listen to J-pop?”
Lol I snorted so badly at that! She is so completely out of her depth and much more geeky in this than I imagined...but it works! And it was nice of Ryan to suggest that she hang out with his friends.
I'm looking forward to some Marissa/Taylor/Summer bonding if you can manage it.
Oh and what the hell is going on with Marissa...you've got me hooked (is she secretly sleeping wiht Volchok and keeping up the act for Summer that she isn't...I don't know if you hated Volchok or not so don't know if you'd ever write them getting it on in that sense).
And i'm loving your random original character. Nate is funny but in an almost satirical way. Oh and...
“Sounds like your type, Nate. Just stay out of trouble this time.”
Talk about planting the seeds for your plot, is there more to Nate than meets the eye?
Ave x x x |
 krisz 2008-06-23 . chapter 2Seth was great referring to Taylor..."easy on the eyes...not so much on the ears." LOL. |
 XWaltzforVenusX 2008-06-22 . chapter 2Hehe, your Taylor is always so random and awkward. I love it. Entertaining as always, and I can't wait to read more of it!
-x |
 mely-fan 2008-06-20 . chapter 1Okay, it's different, I loved it! But I don't understand it entirely. I loved the Pron and Cons of Chino.
Please continue, update something soon!
-Meli- |
 Avecia 2008-06-17 . chapter 1So i'm finally getting around to reviewing this.
Such an interesting take on the characters, moving them into a completely different environment...brilliant!
I hope that we see a bit more of evil!Veronica in this when you update because you knows I |
 Brightest Firefly 2008-06-15 . chapter 1Can't wait to see where you take this. :-) |
 XWaltzforVenusX 2008-06-15 . chapter 1This was wonderfully quirky, and I'm totally loving it. I do hope you decide to continue at some point.
-x |
 TreeHilluver23 2008-06-15 . chapter 1Really great start. Can't wait to see what happens next. update really soon. |
 ObsessedRomantic 2008-06-15 . chapter 1Okay, A little different. Everyone's in Chino? Neat.
This Nathan guy...should I recognize him from somewhere? He seems a little familiar.
Good story, nice build-up. Can't wait to see where you're going with it. Yay that R isn't w/ M here! Goodie.
Hope to see more, you're def peaking interest. |
 krisz 2008-06-15 . chapter 1Very interesting start!! Very original story line as well.
Taylor asking Ryan to borrow his ruler. Hee hee.
Looking forward to see where this one goes. |