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RebleQueen
2008-12-11 . chapter 2
Wow, I just found this story and I must say, it is very interesting. I know real life can intrude on one's creativity, but I hope to see an update soon.
Loraya
2008-07-30 . chapter 2
Hm... Interesting...

I hope you continue. I like where it's going.
Avecia
2008-06-24 . chapter 2
“So…do any of you listen to J-pop?”

Lol I snorted so badly at that! She is so completely out of her depth and much more geeky in this than I imagined...but it works! And it was nice of Ryan to suggest that she hang out with his friends.

I'm looking forward to some Marissa/Taylor/Summer bonding if you can manage it.

Oh and what the hell is going on with Marissa...you've got me hooked (is she secretly sleeping wiht Volchok and keeping up the act for Summer that she isn't...I don't know if you hated Volchok or not so don't know if you'd ever write them getting it on in that sense).

And i'm loving your random original character. Nate is funny but in an almost satirical way. Oh and...

“Sounds like your type, Nate. Just stay out of trouble this time.”

Talk about planting the seeds for your plot, is there more to Nate than meets the eye?

Ave x x x
krisz
2008-06-23 . chapter 2
Seth was great referring to Taylor..."easy on the eyes...not so much on the ears." LOL.
XWaltzforVenusX
2008-06-22 . chapter 2
Hehe, your Taylor is always so random and awkward. I love it. Entertaining as always, and I can't wait to read more of it!

-x
mely-fan
2008-06-20 . chapter 1
Okay, it's different, I loved it! But I don't understand it entirely. I loved the Pron and Cons of Chino.

Please continue, update something soon!
-Meli-
Avecia
2008-06-17 . chapter 1
So i'm finally getting around to reviewing this.

Such an interesting take on the characters, moving them into a completely different environment...brilliant!

I hope that we see a bit more of evil!Veronica in this when you update because you knows I
Brightest Firefly
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
Can't wait to see where you take this. :-)
XWaltzforVenusX
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
This was wonderfully quirky, and I'm totally loving it. I do hope you decide to continue at some point.

-x
TreeHilluver23
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
Really great start. Can't wait to see what happens next. update really soon.
ObsessedRomantic
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
Okay, A little different. Everyone's in Chino? Neat.

This Nathan guy...should I recognize him from somewhere? He seems a little familiar.

Good story, nice build-up. Can't wait to see where you're going with it. Yay that R isn't w/ M here! Goodie.

Hope to see more, you're def peaking interest.
krisz
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
Very interesting start!! Very original story line as well.

Taylor asking Ryan to borrow his ruler. Hee hee.

Looking forward to see where this one goes.
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