Wow, very creepy, particularly when you realize who the story is between. (I wasn't even expecting it and I'm in the middle of writing a Darkside Luke story!)

But I think it definitely conveyed a message, and I like the way you did it. (Though I'd hate to think what Mara's wrath would be like!)

:-D

Wonderful!

(I'm returning the favour of reviewing. Although you didn't review - I'm guessing it has something to do with the missing 'send message' link on your profile - you added The Prophecy, Fulfilled to your favourite stories and that's already so nice of you. :)

I loved the idea of Luke joining the Dark Side - loved the name you gave him - and how his personality has changed completely. This was a brilliant fanfiction!

Well done,

AnyaTheRhymer

wow, now I'm interested in what's going to happen. Very good start. Please update soon!

-JMSS