BAH-HAHAHAHA YUFFIE, SUCH A DORK. I liked this a lot. (I missed the deadline, waah waah. D:) I love how Sora is so cute--I imagine him pumping his fists up and down as he chants.

""Nope, I'm gonna have to agree with the girls on this one," Sora said. "The bottle landed on Yuffie, so you are obviously mistaken.""-- Wait, didn't it land on Kairi? SORA, WTF, YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO PLAY SPIN THE BOTTLE. XD

Loren.
You are my wifey.
Now and forever.

oy i'm iz being a bum.

SUPER BUM.


anyways; RIKUYUFFIE IS PURE WIN.

i love this. to death, i got a little confused (but i'm a dancing tard, so thats my bad...can't wait for moar!~)

kl;fj;a;g;a!! *[]*

S-Sora. Oh, how I love you.

No, seriously. He's adorable in this a-and the Sora/Kairi parts where so cute and flowed nicely decpite really being secondary a-and--

*LOVES*

I'm really fond with the way you wrote Yuffie. At first, what with your opening I was like, "...wtf?" and then it dawned on me and by the end I thought you mastered her character. It was awesome and subtle yet, um, not?

Also, that kiss at the end? Hot. Really, Really, Hot. So Hot, I can only use caps in order to describe it.

This was so amazingly cute, Loren.

- Pixie

L. M. F. A. O.

:3

there are no words.
none at all.


just. wow.
that. was. amazingly. amazingly. amazingly. lorenfaceesque humour.

i've missed it quite terribly

I'm curious for more keep on writing ^^