Very good. I like Suspians, keep more coming!

Wow you seem to have a penchant for writing sad stories. I loved this one the most! :)(:

T./V.

LOVED it! Even if Susan is different!

I'm glad you found an ending. You've got all the senses well-covered. I like it.

Russet

I feel really bad for Susan! At least they are together at the end, right? Are you sure you aren't a Susan/Caspian supporter?

-pawz

Hey i love it! its very cool how you put that she needed to forget everything the kiss,a nd how she is feeling bad because f it, its a good story, hEy its a sugestion, why dont you put 2 or 3 morre chapters, were maybe she goes to caspian again and they ended up together, or i dont know or a POV of caspian... it wll be cool, and ifg you are mnot continuing it, it was a good story i like it, thnks for putting it...

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