THAT LITTLE SNITCH! Poor Wolf. :( But I don't get the end. She unshamefully got Wolf thrown in jaill and then brought him a pie? OOr was she just teasing him and she was going to eat the pie right in front of him?

Heh, poor widdle Wolf. Shouldnt be so naughty to worry sheep like that :)

Id totally forgot about The 10th Kingdom series! I re-read your story a few times to try and give you some constructive criticism, but it didnt need any, i loved it! Have you read the Fables comics by Bill Willingham,i think they might be just your thing. Keep up the great work.

I love Wolf. (One of the lesser known Mini-series!) I read this a while back before I got an account and had a good chuckle over it. I love the description of the 'angelic' Shepherdess...oh, they look so innocent...) Anyways, enjoyed it very much. Good job.

I don't think the premise is very plausible, but your style is nothing to sneeze at. I enjoyed this.

awesome story very creative. isnt a shephards pie like a meat pie? with gravy? yum! lol

I loved it! It's hilarious.

HILARIOUS. I loved it :D Please keep writing! I love the tenth kingdom :D

(on that note: I did write a new chapter for my fan fic xD which you reviewed a week or so ago. just pointing out)

EVIL EVIL shepherdess.

shepherdess makes quite a mess...but little lambs are lovely :D

Great so far :D will continue reading. I like this shepherdess she makes me laugh.