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| LoverFaery 2008-08-08 ch 1,  | abuseOoh! Crowley/Aziraphale. I suppose I'd forgotten THEM when I said fanfic wasn't done right if it wasn't R/S. Jolly good show, and all that. Don't want to demean myself or this story by calling it "cute" when "cute" will clearly not do it justice, and so I will now stop. |
| FoxxFire5 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story! I love how you progress through the centuries here and show us the development of Crowley and Aziraphale's relationship. The last part is very sweet, and I like the way you handle the relationship between the two. Starting with the fortune teller is also great, and ending with her prophecy coming true is a nice way to complete the circle. Loved this. :D |
| Lisseyelen aka Lady V 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful, I love it :) I especially like how the breathing sort of indicates their statuses. I'd be interested in knowing how Crowley got sick, though...it's kind of mysterious and seems sinister. |
| Maggoty Anne 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseYou've written this with wonderful attention to detail, and it really sets the mood. The grimy tapestries, the flickering candle-light, and the vivid description of Crowley's agony later on are perfect. You managed to imply slash without making in fluffy or ooc. Kudos to you on your random references to historical (or biblical) events. Thanks to that ancient greece reference, I can't stop imagining Crowley egging Caligula on. XD |
| Estelle Tiniwiel 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseLovely little piece. Subtle and well written. Estelle Tiniwiel -x- |
| Pandora de Romanus 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseVery cute... Very lovely. I could just hug Crowly at the end... Congrats! |
| Sawlt to Your Suger 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abusethats cute. :D you have aziraphale speak "mildly" twice, and it irked me a tinyeensy bit, but not enough to really matter. hmm. favorite line? THE SHRUG. and the description of his clothes as he does it/as he gets his hand cut. hehh. but im all about the blood. yayy. kudos. we must chill on tuesday. hawtie only works there on tuesdays methinks. :D lolz. |