 Kirah Ruth 2008-06-19 . chapter 1This made me go "Aww," and at the same time, it had a lot more meaning than the pointless fluff that I generally write. You really captured the fact that Sora and Riku are the closest of friends, nevermind anything more than that. I adore how you write, too; it's a little unconventional, with statements that aren't quite clear and a complete disregard for conventional grammar, but it works surprisingly well in conveying the feeling of a scene more than the slightly more irrelevant things. It mirrors real life, I suppose.
Overall, very, very good, have a cookie =) (and a fave. And a reccomendation or two to my friends, because a oneshot like this does not deserve to go unnoticed.) |