Loved it! So sad! I will definetly check out the sequel.

ok first of all the nude thing was to much and second of all, the books are surrounded by magic and he dies by a building falling on him?? seriously, you might wanna think about changing it.

couldn't you have just put it in this chapter ?
oh well . . .

aw :(

do not make him die!1

Ohh my god, so sad

AWESOME!

ok

Wow. That was sad. Could you write more?

that was writen pretty well. I have one burning question- Since she could still feel his pulse why didn't she do CPR instead of letting him die? that's all because you could of added more onto it as the fact that she might feel responsable if the CPR hadn't worked. :D sory 4 dat just had ta say :D

You know, I thought I put favorited this. Oops. I liked it, but it was incredibly short. Two-shot? That, and a lot of the sentences were broken into pieces by random paragraphs...

it's ok but it could be better if you add more. if this is your first story then you are gonna be a great athur someday.

HOLD UP!

Don't bring him back to life, that is dumb. You can make her sulk around or something, maybe join the titans.

And yes, this is because I want more chapters to Beta. : ).

that was touching. good one!

ALSOMIS! PLZ TELL ME TAT THERE IS GONNA B MORE!