I love your work and I love this story; please come back to it soon, I beg of you.

You wouldn't disappoint your fans, would you?

Hilarious. I love the interaction between Big Boss and the Major - unreal, how do you come up with this stuff? ^_^
Gun oil and sweaty chests, your scenes are so descriptive.
Hal blushing and being tenderly mended by Snake...
And yes, Gackt does rock. :)

Aw, you seriously have to finish this!
Its so cute, I've always loved Snake and Otacon as a couple :D
Finish? Please?
I'll give you a cookie in return? x3

This is a pretty cool story! Its always nice to see snake when hes not turning someone into swiss cheese with his guns lol. Great job!

I'm sorry, I really shouldn't go around flaming people.
I aplogize and I didn't mean it.
That was uncalled for, I sincerely Apologize for my earlier lapse in judgement :D.
To be totally honest I was just trying to get myself banned...
sorry , I hope you can understand :) .

Wow That's awesome. You reappear and start writing my new favorite pairing. Well as usual I love your work. ^.^ Here's hoping for more soon.

Sweet and wicked awesome! Keep it up ^.^
P.S. Gackt does rule. Have you tried The Gazette though?

D'aw, for some reason I find this story really cute. MGS4 has only strengthened my love for the Snake/Otacon and Big Boss/Ocelot pairings. You write pretty well, and for some reason I like the crotchety old man persona Snake has on. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Yay sunburns.

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I like it. XD Samantha demands more. And offers homemade lemon meringe pie in return!

I loved this story. Hope you add more...I've always though Snake and Ocelot fics were hawt!
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