 Liloexp626 2009-06-15 . chapter 13Well, now you got me here reviewing a story which involves two fandoms of three that I know almost nothing about... but I loved it! I liked a lot the whole thing: the plot of XR getting some punishment after gambling and playing... well, I'm not about to re-tell the story. Might be too spoiler-like and you wrote it, so you must know what it is about, right? XD
I don't know if I've told you this before, but your style of writing and your story-telling is a very nice one. You don't need lots and lots of words just to tell how the character feels; you get that perfectly well by using just a few sentences, if not only words, like the last one of this story:
"Oh, sweet mother of Venus."
It's a sentence that has been already used a lot of times, yet it doesn't seem like you're over using it. It fits perfectly every time you use it, wherever you use it. I like that ;D
And Kila, wow! He character is just awesome. Random, somewhat violent at times (though not the scary violent type), and the whole homage-speaking. My favorite line of hers in this fic was the "Straight up, McFly!" when she and XR are fleeing. Talking about homages, this last one you presented here (the whole "model citizen" thing) is a pretty nice homage to Lilo & Stitch too ^^
I liked reading as well the making-of process and the deleted scenes. I liked seeing how you gave this story as much credibility as you could (like, for example, when you had to change the first chapter in which the thug comes in that easily and you had it changed to the thug using a hologram to disguise himself.) Another good thing yet is that I found some amazing fanart of yours I had never seen :) Maybe you should do some more pics for your fanfics -they're real good!
Well, I just started reading I Palindrome I. So far, I'm loving it too, and I hope I'll be done with it within two weeks or so.
This story does completely deserve a fav! ^^ |
 Invader Becky and Clad 2009-04-22 . chapter 6tsk XR tell the truth, oh well, great chapter, good line Correct," Marian said smoothly, leaning back and stroking his pet. XR hated that stupid animal. He could swear it laughed at him.
Not that it had a head.
Meh.
no head? XD. |