That was so totally awesome!

So cute I love it I love jasper he is my favorite charicter great.

I absolutly luv this chapter because of course Alice and Jasper are my favorite charactors in twilight and I hope you can write more stories about them

Aww, good job. Really interesting take on things. =D

luvd it! i cant rly put my finger on why, but i just did :)
its rly deep too it touched my soul lol :D
~luv2read134

Very descriptive and in character. I absolutely love it. Jasper is one of my favorited characters as well, so that fact made me enjoy this all the more.
Continue writing, I'm sure the more pieces you post the better they will get!
Again, very well written and creative. I really did enjoy it.

Very good, Jasper is my absolute favorite character, and it's not often that you get such a good look into his head like this.

It was written very well, and it felt like Jasper, which is a big accomplishment. I was listening to Harvey Two-face while reading this, and I must say that it certainly added to the effect.

I loved it! Drabbles are definitely some of my favorite things to read.

beautiful

aww. that was awesome. i love stories from jasper's point of view! there are not enough of them!

Made me smile in the end :) Thank you.

I sure am glad you posted this one. This was really deep, and I'm trying not to sound like an idiot saying that. I truley loved it.

Jasper's always been my favorite too, so to read something like this BY him...well, not many people do it.

THIS WAS AMAZING. It flowed nicely (always important to me) and it was very... Jasper.

Very good.

-Livy Alice

Nice job! You captured Jasper's character excellently!

well that was very very good and I like Jasper too.

That. Was. Amazing!
i loved it and it sounded so much like something that jasper WOULD say. ^^