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miko hanyou konichiwa
2009-07-15 . chapter 18
ok i cLOVE THIS STORY but the end is very interesting, wat is going to happen what uneasy feeling will unleash on halloween town?
will ted and renga ever be together? will shock and lock? please there has to be a part two to all this. WRITE..CONTINUE..UPDATE! I..THERE MUST BE MORE!
JV's Jack
2009-01-28 . chapter 1
I can't help but feel there's an anime/manga type feeling into this. it's kinda hard to imagine all this wonderful cast of characters being in the same type of animation TNBC is in. i imagine them all in an anime. i'm not sure if that was ur intention or not, but this is one amazing story! i love how u managed to weave spell-casting into play! it's my kinda fantasy story!
Lolli-of-doom
2009-01-15 . chapter 18
yay! slight cliffy!! (I wasn't being sarcastic i really love cliff hangers) thanks so much for updating!
Skeleton Jon
2009-01-10 . chapter 18
Awesome!
this is one of your best stories yet!

Can't wait to see what's next!
Lolli-of-doom
2009-01-07 . chapter 17
another amazing chappie! thanx so much for updating!!
Moonfirestorm
2008-12-26 . chapter 15
Can't wait for the next chapter, this is an intriguing story with excellant description and plot. Keep it up!

Moonfirestorm
Moonfirestorm
2008-12-26 . chapter 2
I'm offically hooked. You've got some great description in here! Lol 'she was so sweet she could give you diabeties' LOVE that! The 3 new girls annoy the hell out of me, so you suceeded in that area as well. Keep up the good work!

Going to the next chapter

Moonfirestorm
Lolli-of-doom
2008-12-25 . chapter 14
great story! I don't know if I already reviewed it though 'cuz my computer sucks. anywhoo... LOVE IT! ranga and ted are really cute together!! update soon... and tell Papa I said hi!! (I read your other stories BEFORE I got an account, just to let you know that I'm not a creep-o stalker or anything O_o)
YusukiShredder
2008-12-01 . chapter 13
YET ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPPIE! -sque!

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I have no internet ^^' -looks around library suspiciously-
Ninny-na
2008-10-26 . chapter 12
Interesting story. :D
Skeleton Jon
2008-10-23 . chapter 12
awesome! this was well worth the wait!

you've also matched my personality perfectly!!

cant wait to see whats next!
YusukiShredder
2008-10-02 . chapter 11
OMG! I want to know what happens next :O please do more! I hope that the girls get their men back!
YusukiShredder
2008-09-19 . chapter 10
*hesitates fingers right above key board as she tries to explain how much she wants the next chapter to come and how cool this one was* O.o ... I don't think there are any words invented for it yet O-O
Ranoko
2008-09-18 . chapter 10
Go ravens! ^.^

XD I like the birds~

But that stupid puppy dog act gets at least someone every time! *facepalm*

And sounds like Aphrodite may have found someone who she can actually help~ (and/or visa-versa. I'm not doing so well with wording things lately~ -w-' )

Sometimes, I wish I had your focus. You get a story started and finished, even if it takes a while, and have fairly consistent updates~
I really need to work on that. XP'

Keep up the great work! ^-^

Ja~
YusukiShredder
2008-08-30 . chapter 9
O.O

NO! Sally! I hope she'll be okay! And what about Jack? WILL HE SNAP OUT OF IT AND REMEMBER JUST HOW WONDERFUL THE SWEET RAGDOLL IS?!

I hope Aphrodite can fix this, and soon!

Well, waiting for more eagerly, Yusuki.
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