 Veera Grier 4/24/11 . chapter 15Fantastic story! Poor Jen, she has really bad luck, even in the city ;) I like she tries to solve the problem alone, that she is not useless and weak (even if she needs help). And chapter 14 is...wow! |
 Dancing in Red 3/17/11 . chapter 15HA! I really enjoyed this story... the Ronon/Jen interaction was just brilliant. |
 hifield 3/3/10 . chapter 15Again... that was a wonderful story - never gets old. Loved the whole invisible thing and all the details. I'm sure I'll read it many more times. |
 hifield 3/3/10 . chapter 14Help someone needs to get the guys! Gotta go to the next chapter. |
 hifield 3/3/10 . chapter 13Justice ... I like it! |
 hifield 3/3/10 . chapter 12Well that was steamy. What self-control! Love this couple. |
 hifield 3/3/10 . chapter 11Now this was a dark chapter! lol Love how outraged and disturbed Rodney was - love this side of him (but hate him paired with Jennifer). Intense chapter - loved it. |
 hifield 3/3/10 . chapter 10Wow! the Klingon banter was a great touch! Really powerful chapter - need to get on with the story to find out what Ronon does. |
 hifield 3/3/10 . chapter 9The plot thickens. Glad they called the calvary in. |
 hifield 3/3/10 . chapter 8Oh my goodness! I'm so glad I've read this a few times or I'd be worried. Even Ronon might have problems with an invisible enemy. |
 hifield 3/3/10 . chapter 7Loved Ronon's thoughts - so well written! Jennifer's panic was very traumatic - great chapter. |
 hifield 3/3/10 . chapter 6Love how their relationship is building. The darker and creepier the better. |
 hifield 3/3/10 . chapter 5Good chapter! Like how Ronon traveled through the city looking for the intruder. |
 hifield 3/3/10 . chapter 4So glad ronon felt it too whatever it is! At least she shouldn't feel so crazy now. |
 hifield 3/3/10 . chapter 3He is such a hero! Poor Jen .. seems like something is always happening to her! I love this story! |