Fantastic story! Poor Jen, she has really bad luck, even in the city ;) I like she tries to solve the problem alone, that she is not useless and weak (even if she needs help). And chapter 14 is...wow!

HA! I really enjoyed this story... the Ronon/Jen interaction was just brilliant.

Again... that was a wonderful story - never gets old. Loved the whole invisible thing and all the details. I'm sure I'll read it many more times.

Help someone needs to get the guys! Gotta go to the next chapter.

Justice ... I like it!

Well that was steamy. What self-control! Love this couple.

Now this was a dark chapter! lol Love how outraged and disturbed Rodney was - love this side of him (but hate him paired with Jennifer). Intense chapter - loved it.

Wow! the Klingon banter was a great touch! Really powerful chapter - need to get on with the story to find out what Ronon does.

The plot thickens. Glad they called the calvary in.

Oh my goodness! I'm so glad I've read this a few times or I'd be worried. Even Ronon might have problems with an invisible enemy.

Loved Ronon's thoughts - so well written! Jennifer's panic was very traumatic - great chapter.

Love how their relationship is building. The darker and creepier the better.

Good chapter! Like how Ronon traveled through the city looking for the intruder.

So glad ronon felt it too whatever it is! At least she shouldn't feel so crazy now.

He is such a hero! Poor Jen .. seems like something is always happening to her! I love this story!