...Um... This is... It's very well written and I think I understand, but it's disjointed. I-- Well, I like it, if only because Kagome's granddaughter and her "friend" get it in the end. Poor Kagome half crazy and willing the shrine back to life. At least she got to have a family? ...Yeah...

Brr... hate to ask how she got there in the first place, losing herself like that. Nicely done!

i love the desolate feeling of this story. the complete rejection of reality in kagome's mind was well done, but not overdone. you did an amazing job with exploring some of the darker workings of the mind.