I LOVE YOUR AKIRA FANFIC! I had hoped someone would right a fanfic to do wiv tetsuo living on after the explosion. btw, wat do u think about leonardo di caprio (spelling?) being kaneda in the remake of akira thats coming out in a few years? I think they should have chosen a younger actor, coz kaneda is suppost to be 15 right? lol, lov the fic, hope u make more!

kaneda-kun fan xx

will be updating this

good story

this is so interesting

So far, this story seems a slightly rushed, so I'd recomme_d paci_g yourself a little more. However, your plot idea certai_ly is_'t the worst I've see_, a_d I'll follow this to see how it tur_s out. Maybe it wo_'t be terribly cliched.


I'll post a more detailed review whe_ I fix the key betwee_ M, B, H, J, a_d spacebar o_ my keyboard a_d whe_ it's _ot 11:39 P. M. for me.

Alright! I was really happy to see this updated! I like how Tetsuo really wants to make a difference, and Kaneda living in a library. That was sure different!

The only things I caught were a few missing words or letters. For example:
-"...you were as accurate in going to a specific time." I'm assuming was supposed to be "weren't."
-"He himself so that he stood close to them..." Would that be "He positioned himself"?
-"...he once again gazed upon hat face." The "t" is missing off "that."

Anyway, it's great so far, and I hope to see the third chapter soon. :)

Wow! A story that reveals what happened after everything. Also quite a touching reflection on why Tetsuo got himself in the mess he was in. Definately worth reading.

yay tetsuo!!
plz update soon!
can u bring kaori back to life somehow?

Wow, this was pretty good! I actually felt sorry for Manga!Tetsuo there, which says quite a bit because I didn't like him. I'm interested to see what happens next.

I only found a few spelling/grammar errors ("in order to prove yourself to other" should be "in order to prove yourself to others," and "am" in the title should be capitalized), but other than that, keep up the good work!