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Namina
2009-10-09 . chapter 39
Wow, I forgot to mention this but I almost didn't think it was a tumor. That surprising was the last thing I was thinking of because I don't see that in fics. It's always rare to see a character suffering from that.

Anyway, when I first thought of it I was like...wtf, is she a guy? But I was like no...she's a girl...and than I thought maybe a he-she? But that would seem out of place for a LXG fic and more like a drama soap opera thing to happen.

So yeah, that's quite unique and clever. Please continue this when you can!
Namina
2009-09-22 . chapter 40
Wow, I'm a new reader and this is such an awesome story! I read it all in one day. I didn't think I would be able to but I did and it's 7:30 that I finished it. I think it was around 10 that I started, kinda a fast reader but still...this is a wow story.

I'm quite surprise she want's to push Henry to do it like that. I was thinking maybe she would nudge him in another way, like...'no land surgeon and if Henry can't do it...than it looks like my fate is sealed'.

Please update this soon!
Alchemelia
2009-08-11 . chapter 40
OMG! I love this story! Please, if anything, finish it for me, yeah? Thanks for writing so far, the style of writing, the perfectness of it, it completely draws me in to what Marina is feeling. I've noticed a few typos, but they're understandable ones, and I forget where they are now. :P

Please update soon!
Grim Bonez
2009-07-28 . chapter 40
I cant wait until you post another story!^_^ please make it soon!
Irish Ghost
2009-07-28 . chapter 40
This is a very good story. Please don't stop! :( 'lost puppy dog face'
anon
2009-07-27 . chapter 40
This is fabulous, in a sad way of course...but very reviting, and epic, it has action, drama and romance, this story should have a movie of its own... like a LXG spinoff.

Please continue it's amazing.

(I am a member, just haven't signed in...I am author AngelaBennet)
kristaelizabeth
2009-07-25 . chapter 40
I do still read this! Haha, it's still going great. I have gotten a lot of inspiration for my story from yours. You're a great writer and I wouldn't be able to go for FORTY chapters without having my main character verbally speak. You've done a fantastic job taking the story slow, step by step, and you're still an amazing writer. Please keep writing, it's inspiring.
FindaHappyPlace
2009-07-06 . chapter 40
I read this, I still love it, and you still must update... like now. Kay thanks.
CelticRoseOfTheLake
2009-07-04 . chapter 40
No Henry! do it! Save her!

:(
NightAssassin
2009-06-25 . chapter 40
I'm sorry to say, but if she ends up being able to speak due to the tumor's removal, I am going to be **. It's just too...storybook. Similarly, if Jekyll ends up operating for Marina, I will also be disappointed. Doctors don't operate on those they can't be objective with, that's just common sense.

But, as always, your story, your decision.

Although I can foresee the story ending in a way which I wouldn't like, the story currently is, as always, dramatic and exciting. I was actually wondering if this had been updated recently, and went looking for it. Turns out, it had.
valkyriegorbash
2009-06-23 . chapter 40
I like this idea. Putting Henry in the situation to have to gain confidence in himself to perform the surgery because his character is often left feeing inadequate and needing Edward to save things or people (when he decides to play nice that is).
Wolfinson
2009-06-21 . chapter 40
Hey! I still read this! I can understand her plight though. She has never had to deal with a doctor such as Henry or a surgeon but to think that closed-mindedly is a little unnerving. She doesn't realize that if he did the surgery and messed up, he would probably die literally and/or figuratively. I hate to say it but I am shocked at how selfish Marina was being in this chapter.

Still a good update though. Looking forward to the next one!
RecordxPlayer
2009-06-21 . chapter 40
I still read!! :) was happy to see a new chapter, hopefully nothing too terrible happened to bring about the delay. Happy writings :)
Page-Mistress
2009-06-21 . chapter 40
YAY! AN UPDATE! I was starting to think you had abandoned the story!
masqueradewitch
2009-06-21 . chapter 40
I am still paying attention to this story, and I enjoyed this chapter. I am looking forward to learning why Henry is unwilling to do the surgery himself. Please update a little sooner than before.
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