like the story...a lil too close to juno but good all the same update soon!

I like this funky twist...and all the Juno quotes.

Yeah... I knew that sounded like Juno... huh...

GENIUS. U MADE THE STORY SO...JUST, WOW.
"Jasper Hale...I didn't think he had it in him."
BAHAHAHA, MY FAVE PART.
GOOD JOB!

Hey lady. It's Amy from TA.

I like it! It's a good blend of the two stories with some tweakage. Nicely done :)

I love Juno, so I'm super excited about this story. I can't wait to see how it turns out!

hehe...Diablo Cody... freakin' genius, btw. this is good, please update soon!

haha hes actually really good in...in chair. wow you have combined my two favorite things. twilight and juno! Go you! great chapter! Update soon!

hey well not that its not good but u sound like ur copying Juno and well thats not cool you should go with the same story but ur own ideas not the ones from Juno! sorry!1

Good chapter, updates soon.

-Nikki

First off-great story plot...etc.
Secondly-the movie JUNO was very interesting
Thirdly-The story, so far, is wonderful.
please update soon.

Aww that's so sweet

Good start, I can't wait to see how everyone fits in the story.
update soon!

-Nikki

great start!! Update soon!!