O.O...goodness gracious...Allen just can't seem to catch a break, can he? poor thing...this is definitely gonna end in heartbreak...

That was beautiful. Sniff.
I loved it, so sad, but sexy. I feel so bad for Narein, but at the same time, I understand how Allen feels. Oh dear. This is going to have such a sad ending - but I love tragedy. Please update when you can!

Oh noez, what a drastic place to stop! D: Of course it's going to be eating at me now until you put up something more! >_<

But hello! I've been ghosting your site for a while I've finally gotten non-lazy enough to respond to you. I really love the way people tend to write Allen's time in India (though I've only seen two so far, ha ha)... And I must say I am constantly deeply impressed by your writing of Cross. I can't write double-edged predicaments of any short-term exicitement to save my life, so I always love reading stories where that occurs. More plz? :O

I also admire how your characters are fairly bold-vibrant as characters. ^^ Your little details are nice too. :3 I see you have some continuity from story to story that you like to bring up; I see some elements in this story that resemble elements in "Mana" and "Cross" as well. Fun! ^^ whatever makes it worth writing to you. :33

Your fics by and large have been a driving force for me writing my own detailing time of Cross n Allen together; I'd be honored if you'd drop by someday when it's posted. xD

This is Ganimyde here, btw. Too lazy to log in. :P Good luck and keep working hard! Don't let real life get to you too much. What part of Japan are you in? You say it's cold... I was in Hokkaido this summer for school: I'd love to know more about where you are at the moment! :D

Oh, and while I love the idea of cross being a "red haired devil", red-haired and red-headed (just like brown-haired, too) have a hyphen, I believe. :x (*hides*)

What a great long chapter =) Poor Narein. And Allen is heartbreaking.
Can't wait to see how Cross is going to react to Allen.
Thank you for the wonderful read!

o-o


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That was one helluva hot chapter!! >:3

But omg Allen says Ney! lol

I just really am speechless... I can't wait for another UPDATE!
d-(^_-)z

...eh? o.O I have a feeling that Narein just completely missed the good General's point, like he usually does. I wonder what Cross actually meant to say...

Wow, I didn't know Allen's Innocence was THAT sensitive.

Narein needs to be whacked in the head a few times. I feel sorry for him, yet at the same time exasperated because he keeps screwing up every single time. It must be awkward for Allen to be treated like a girl even after Narein knows he's a boy.

*sigh* Oh well, looks like everything is going down the toilet from here on out. Why are your stories ALWAYS depressing? D: Look what happened to poor Komui and Mana! (You write tragedy very well, though - and that's a compliment. :D)

OMFG! Yay! A chapter! ^__^

I liked this chapter... It makes me wonder what you had written and didn't put in though... lol. I'm really glad with what we got though. This is quite an interesting development...

I miss that Allen~ :3

Hope a new chapter comes out soon! Thanks for this one! GL!

P.S. There was totally an ad for Heroes Season 3 Premiere above your update which is funny (not haha funny though...) because that's exactly what I was watching~! I read Narein during the commercial breaks and almost wished Heroes would end faster so I could keep reading... but I love all my interests equally I say! xD

Go as far as Narein would go! Go for the stars! xD
I am really loving this. I don't think I have ever seen a NxA pairing before so CONGRATS for being the first (as far as I know). Not to mention how incredibly awesome it is. I love your writing style. I await the next update! ^~^

Yay chapter. Thanks for updating! 8D Great chapter.

E, reference to Mana!

Loved this chapter so much, but poor Narein's got the completely wrong idea about Cross, lol!

Hope you update soon!

-PaintedTurtleShell

Great chapter, and it was pretty cool seeing the same scene shown in the anime ...

Of course, it's also a reminder of what's going to eventually happen ... I can't wait to see what ground you cover between here and the 'end.'

Yay! Narein has patience! I can remeber those puppet moments happening in Mana, I was seriously wondering if they were ever going to make a reappearance...and look, they did!

I don't know how to say in a different way that your writing is as touching as always, and it never ceases to move me.

With all of my writing love,

Super Goat Grl

*whacks Narein on the head* AGH, stupid boy! Though at least he's trying his best. *sigh* I don't think they should go any further than making out; I don't even think they have enough time left to get to taking all their clothes off. =.=;

Oh wow, a confrontation with Cross? Now that will be embarrassing...

"Cross" is almost parallel with this story now, isn't it? Are you going to mention any of this stuff in his POV?

Well! And here I thought that you`d never write shounen-ai! I`m impressed! Interesting... I`m one of the (probably few) people who DOESN`T think Allen looks like a girl. I think his face is too sharp and his body too proportional - if that makes any sense. Still, I love reading these kinds of fics! I don`t really mind femAllen ones either, mostly because the personality of the character tends to stay the same... hm... Now I see where you all are coming from lol.

I`ll be looking forward to hopefully more chapters when you hjave the time!

Uwah! xD

Finally! That boy is so slow, lmao. But I guess it could be hard to tell especially if you were stuck on thinking Allen was a girl... But I see what he means about feeling that he wasn't understood at all. Ah, I wonder what'll happen next! I feel bad that Allen was tricked like that because he hadn't let Narein finish his sentence... Now he's gone and said that he'd do whatever! And worse! Narein's letting Allen think that all Narein wants from him is physical contact! Poor Allen~

Anywho~ Thanks for the chapter! I can't wait for another UPDATE! d-(^_-)z