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| whirleeq 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is really great - a good snapshot of Laura's thoughts... that whole scene was so poignant and devastating and this really does convey the emotion present in Laura's one word commentary. |
| Lady Henrietta 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good job of capturing the disappointment in that last scene. I hope that they can find some solace in each other. |
| Mariel3 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseYou've done it again. I always know you're going to blow me away with whatever you write, and you did it again with this one. This take on her reaction makes so much sense. All those thoughts rolling around in her head and Bill there... Yup. Good one! |