 Twig'um 2008-09-09 . chapter 1OMG!! HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAH THAT WAS AWESOME! |
 Cross - The Damned Alchemist 2008-08-14 . chapter 1Hahahahahaha! That was -- SO GOOD! XD I loved it! Poor Allen... Poor Kanda... Poor Komui... Haha! It was very funny! Thanks!~ |
 MiniBloodyMurder 2008-07-05 . chapter 1lol |
 princess cythera 2008-07-01 . chapter 1lol. entertaining :) :) good work :) :) |
 Marihana1312 2008-06-22 . chapter 1LOL, I love the story, especially the ending. Very cute! |
 Kayday 2008-06-19 . chapter 1hehe, Lavi is gonna hafta learn to walk, with his legs on backwards. |
 olivia-yuymaxwell 2008-06-17 . chapter 1wai i luv this!! it's really funny that kanda shut em up with his last remaks about lavi & lenalee XD kanda in his pushy & persistant mode is really2 HOT i must say!! ahh i wish can see their whole night activities through the video, too bad it has to stopped :D Please write more yullen ne!! |
 Kimmy 2008-06-17 . chapter 1 Nee-Chan! It's so kawaii! I luff it lots! XD
Arigatou for the inspiration cuteness! Kawaii!~ |
 seasnake.756 2008-06-17 . chapter 1Lavi won't have remains to bury... I like this one! |
 You're My Everything 2008-06-17 . chapter 1“That’s **!” He exclaimed. “Oh, my poor Lenalee. You shouldn’t have to watch that.”
LOL!
“Lenalee’s right. If you want to compare it with what we were doing in my room or the female voice shouting Lavi’s name two days ago, I think that was rather tame.”
Lol! very funny!~ |
 Lunara Midnight 2008-06-17 . chapter 1LOL! Very cute, in my opinion, and hilarious too. Change the genre to Romance/Humour. Also, I recommend that you add 'slightLaviLenalee' in the summary'.
I loved the last two paragraphs. |
 Digimagic 2008-06-16 . chapter 1I love Lavi^^! This story was very amusing and I enjoyed reading it very much! Keep writing! |
 ranmyaku-neko 2008-06-16 . chapter 1poor allen. I like the ending, where kanda mentions the "female voice shouting lavi's name" bit. that was the best part in my humble opinion. can't wait to see more from you ^_^ |
 supergalkate 2008-06-16 . chapter 1 Tee hee. You crated this story on MY birthday! xD
Very cute, I really liked it. |
 eish 2008-06-16 . chapter 1Hehe, this made me laugh! XD '“How many times must I tell you to call me Yuu?!”' That part just made me simply crack up and start laughing like mad, xD I dunno why. Heh, great work! |