Wow I'm impressed. I don't know if you were planning on continueing this story or not. But I would love it if you could continue it for me. I really do want to know what happens. Thank you.

I love your writing style. I hope you update soon.

This is awesome; well written with steady action and dialogue. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work!

awsome story! i love how you put the wiica parts in there, i'm learning to be on myself but my homework and studing have limited the time i'm able to read on wicca. anyways, keep up the good work and i can't wait to read more from you!

well i like like this story so far ^^

but i dont think you should use exact and real spells unless you have used them in real life and do actuly practice wicca magic. you probly just think im being silly when i say this but sometimes good spells on the web get merged with bad and often end up with diffrent results. i am a user of the light magics such as healing and luck and have experienced some of this first hand.

also if you dont like what i said above then either ignore me or shout at me i realy dont mind. but i do realy like the story so far.