Ohh, nice addition since I saw the original posted at the contest. Great fic, and it's ever better now with the minor tweaking and additions you've done. Can't wait to see the rest of it posted here.

Updates? Pwease?

I think I'm in love. This story is very unique and well written, i think thats what makes it work. I mean here you have Ratchet not only helping decepticons but having hot sweaty robot sex with them. What more could be asked for? I wonder what will happen when Bonecrusher wakes up? Oh and I dread whats in store when the autobots find out and I know it will happen, I just hope they are gentle with Ratchet cause I think he's falling in love and you can't help who you love. *sigh* I guess only time will tell.
Keep up the great job!
Deuces :)

You have pleased my brain meats with the many robot smexings

Ohh, nice chapter! Mm, I'm enjoying seeing the process of Ratchet working through everyone. Er, not in a bad way but, yeah, you know what I mean. When's Bonecrusher coming back? I hope he doesn't hold his offlining at the hands of Prime against Ratchet. That'd be a tragedy.

Aw, Ratch got attached. Nice scene with Mixmaster. Long Haul... (grins) I sense fun around the corner.

Sorry if this doesn't make sense.

Regards,
Fair.

Hooray for long chapters!

I had planned on review the last chapter to see if Mixmaster was going to get a little more attention/or atleast be special cuz I really love the way you have Mixmaster all stuttery. Its just adorable-Poor thing. I'm glad he got some lovins :)

Lol, I wonder if the end chapter is going to be some orgery?

Mixmaster = <3

Oh, I loved the last part, with 'Good'.
Ratchet, Ratchet. I knew you had it in you!

Mixmaster... I don't think I truly understood his glitch. But I am sure you will clear it up soon ^^
I look forward to more; your writing is awesome, after all :3

>__< I honestly don't know what to say. I don't want to write the generic "it was great, update soon!" crap, but god, that's what it really is. It IS a great story and I do hope you update soon. But anyways, lets try to be more specific. I like the way you're trickling in the Constructicons to engage with Ratchet. And I love how you made Ratchet know he shouldn't want to continue interacting with them, but then going for it anyways XD. It really shows how unavoidable he's feeling about them. HM, that's about it for this chapter :). Insert generic "Good job, update pl0x" here.

Oh, Mixy's one of my favorite 'structies. ^_^ I love that he gets some lovin'! I've loved this fic for quite some time, and it's just getting better! Poor Ratchet is so conflicted. I'm sure the 'structies'll help with that soon enough.

Ah. Next we know is that Bonecrucher will make a full recovery and jump Ratchet along with the rest of the gestalts.

*fans self* Oh, HAWT. Good lord, I LOVED reading the Mixmaster scene and poor guy. Are we ever gonna find out JUST what happened or are you gonna leave that all up to our imaginations? ;P

Oh my god, just... Ugh! I'm always happy to see that email in my inbox to say this has been updated. It just totally makes my day--even if I have exactly 5 minutes until I gotta skedaddle to class! xD

Urgh, I... REALLY wanna see where you go with this. Whether you extend this to Ratchet keeping it on the low with the cons and possibly bonding to the gestalt, or if you leave it at keeping secrets and pick up 'telling Prime' in another fic? Oh, man, this is just one of the best odd couples ever. Just, amazing! <3

Aww, Mixmaster.. ^^ He's afraid he'll hurt who he's with, then? Haa..
You write his stutter really well.

Ksh! And Longhaul too. >3 Soo, checking off zee list, that just leaves Bonecrusher.. Ff ff-ff. >DD

My... seems the Construcicons just can't get enough of Ratchet. Not that Ratchet seems to mind.

Great job!! I hope there will be more soon!

Mm, while Mixmaster was fun... I think I enjoyed the little snippet at the end with Long Haul better. XD I get the distinct impression that Hook sent LH down there for that particular result, sneaky bastard that he is. X3

I love this story but I am a bit scared when Bone Crusher will be making his awakened appearance..