i want you to continu this story i realy like it.

Interesting... Update soon.

lol, the last letter!

good story

youre story is very interesting :)
i am really looking forward to the next chapter

Interesting story.
Even if I'll admit this isn't exactly my favorite couples I'm not completely against it either.
The plot is really one I like and hope to read more of soon.
See ya!

excellent story. cant wait to read the next chapter. I hope you continue.

Very good story. I had my doubts about your writing at the beginning, but I can see that you've improved over the later chapters. Keep up the good work.

These six stand before you judged and found guilty of the crimes of murder conspiracy forgery fraud and TRISON!


That would have had a LOT more impact if you had spelled treason correctly. Seriously Star, I love your writing but sometimes I have to shake my head and wonder at the apparent lack of pride you take in your own work. It's not even a grammar issue. Any spell checking program would have fixed that with a simple click of your mouse.

Is it really that much of a hassle to run the spell check?

loved this chapter
The photo album struck some kind of chord with me

It was Shino that broke the silence that had descended.

“Good evening Naruto-san. Nice to see you and your family doing so well.”


Shino FTW!
LMAO

It's plenty original. I look forward to seeing what the next ten chapters hold.

uh is this it? no offense.. but just letters? it seems bit lame... hopefully u update again. i really enjoyed the rest. I hope u wont get mad saying i dun appreciate ur story.. cuz i gotta admit, i cant write like u do

Update soon! I hate waiting...-.- lol. You've done a very good job so far!

Great Story. I look forward to new chapters. Hopefully there will be some new ones soon, I'm waiting in anticipation of the next one!