 XoChelseaAmberXo 2008-07-07 . chapter 7omgsh! this was magnificent! update soon!!
you're such a gifted writer!:) |
 Everyone Loves Mimi 2008-07-04 . chapter 7OMG! I absolutly Loved it!
I want to see wat happens next keep writing!
Wat was Pims Proposal? |
 maxthieriotluvr 2008-07-02 . chapter 7I'll take the traditonal cherry on top of my "PRETTY PLEASE". I think I'll like Pim's plan and Aly helping as well. Just a peice of advice...I think the reason not a lot of people review is cuz there aren't many around here anymore since the show is over. |
 Glenn Leider 2008-07-02 . chapter 7Hi. I just read Celebrity Encounter for the first time. Interesting story, especially with nobody realizing that Aly and Keely are the same person! A couple of things I would suggest:
1) Spellchecking would be a great idea outside of the text message exchange. I did notice a number of typos, and occasionally you failed to capitalize the word "I".
2) Translate ALL of your foreign-language exchanges (whether or not a translation is provided to your characters). Not all of your readers are fluent in French, German, Spanish, or whatever other language you plan to introduce. :) |
 maxthieriotluvr 2008-06-27 . chapter 6I loved it! I thought the language of love was French? but who cares, spanish is just as good. |
 maxthieriotluvr 2008-06-17 . chapter 3So is it like Aly never did POTF? just cuz Aly woud've picked up on it. I'm also surprised Keely didn't really notice the "similarities" between her and Aly but good stuff though this is fun. |
 maxthieriotluvr 2008-06-16 . chapter 2Hm, interesting. It's ironic cuz Keely and Aly are identical obviously and Phil doesn't notice that. |