Omigosh! Your fic is one of the greatest written fics around! Gawd.. This is my first time reading a Trinity Blood fic and I really am not disappointed! And it's rated M! I mean... We can't always something this wonderful in this category. No offense intended but.. well, I'm just making my opinion. I'll be hanging around more often now! Thanks to you and for making my day! :)
~going to favs~

This is a truely beautiful piece. It's one of the best fairytail style ones I've ever read. normally I don't really like this sort of thing. I'm like the Abel you portrayed in this story in that respect. I don't believe in fairytails. I may have lived a sheltered life but I'm a realist, at least to certain amount of sensibility. I love how you compare Esther to Seth in the story and interaction between Seth, Abel and Esther was cute. I also like how you have the changes Abel goes through throughout.
The scene where Seth takes Esther to Abel is truely magical in my eyes. The original love triangle is good as well and also the slight conflict within that Lilith feels at the end with a small amount of regret. It's all been mixed together quite nicely and I like how you have Seth being one of the few who knows 'Abel the person' and not 'Abel the dark angel'.
I also like how you have Esther and Abel getting married and becoming expectant parents. I think the baby would be adorable! Great story, even greater idea!
I have to ask though, how long will it last? Abel's immortal, Esther isn't. Does his 'love bite' make her immortal as it makes her his and visa versa? I think it's a cute idea and I now how images of Abel and Esther with children that look a little like both of them around them, playing, laughing, the works. It's a good story with a happy ending straight from a picture book. I love it and I think you should be proud of this piece.
Well done and good luck to you with future works.
Happy writing
Dragon's Ghost

HEY! I LOVED YOUR STORY IT WAS UPLIFTING AND VERY DREAMY AND I LOVE THE FAMOUS ABELxESTHER STORY. DID YOU KNOW? THEY ARE MY FAVORITE PARINGS. ANYWAYS, AMAZING STORY AND KEEP ON WRITING YOUR VERY AMAZING, WELL BYE, TILL NETX TIME.

Oh yes please do have more to come of this story I would lei to see more of this A/S TB AU asap when you are free to do so.

Maybe when we get more free time we can do just that ^^

Good work none the less another story of yours I must put in my favorites section right away ^^

really beautiful...wonderful perspective...!

Wow, your story really captures the reader's interest, being in a whole different perspective. All of the Crusniks living together, Lilith choosing Cain, Esther meeting Abel when she was young, marriage of Abel and Esther & Lilith's jealousy... Please keep on spinning your intriguing story!

This is Awesome-tastic!! Great story, I love how you end this! ^^

I loved this, and how you played around with canon to turn it into something believable but totally different xD

Much love!

I absolutely loved this. I think your idea is very interesting and I'd love to read more in this AU. Like some of Esther's childhood under Abel's care and with Seth or more from Lilith's point of view. There is just so much potencial in this idea you have, this universe you've created that I hope you do continue with it. :3 As always your writting skills are superb. I've enjoyed reading the Milk Tea Series and I look forward to everything you write in the future.

Great story, makes my pray that the Sith Lord/Lady in you adds more to it to bring out more pain when you end it again. While well written and nicely done in the portrayal of Abel and the shifting of the various characters in the story I found myself surprised that Cain didn't get a chapter even if it was to further the idea of Abel. I do wish that Asta would have gotten in the story, Ion got a small part, I figured she would have been one of the ones to serve under Abel and been won over by him.

Other than that, not much else to say, well written, nicely done and even though some of the points of history where changed it was done in a wholly believable way.

Thanks for the story.

wow. impressive! it's very good! i really like it! i mean, this could have actually happened in Trinity Blood. it was cute with Abel and Esther. and I love that Joshi Groban song! So She Dances! hehe i listened to it while reading it. good job and thanks for writing! Ü

Oh wow, this is easily the best AU story I've ever read. I don't think I have the focus left to pick out what I liked best (I kind of have tears in my eyes; how embarrassing), but that moment at the end, it was like real, tangible, everlasting desperation underneath the commitment. There was just so much emotion there, especially on Lilith's part.

Oh geez. I really have to step away from the computer for a minute. So many kinds of wonderful.

this was good, i never really gave thought to anything like this before. its a great what if series.

That was wonderful. I love your writing style, it is just so easy to get drawn into.

wow! nice break from the milk tea series... very well written. good pace, nice division, flow's good