I'm converted.
Actually, I was converted at chapter 4, but I kept reading.

That was so good! I'm crying it's so sad...

Are you trying to make me cry? Because you came pretty damn close.

This.
Was.
SO GOOD!

One of the few times in a fic where I'm sad that Kisame dies...YOU
ma'am have serious talent! =)

okay you got me. i'm a shipper. so awesome.
kenni

this was so beautiful. i loved every bit of it and it left my heart aching by the end. amazing work.

A very good story, my friend. Your chapters were short but extremely well written and thoroughly thought out. The ending was sad but strangely apt. I really enjoyed reading this.

AHH!! You made me cry!

This was awesome. I loved it. I wish there was more of it.

Kisame-Fan For Life.

~~Elaana

Hm... Unusual pairing. That doesn't necessarily mean bad though and I like your writing style so I think it's very possible you may be able to convert me. This chapter was short and sweet; I loved it. ^_^ Kisame needs more love - he doesn't get enough, in my opinion.

I probably won't review again till I've finished it all, but so far I like it.

that's funny, it's like catching a fish and then releasing it back in the water.

muwhahaha! love it so far

Aw, that is an awfully bitter-sweet story, my friend. I think I'll just bask in the feeling of it for a while. It's actually nice to read something like this occasionally. It was a really weird pairing, but I was able to get past that xD

Nice read. :)

lulz. Turns out, I love his personality xDD At least the way you write him. And I particularly enjoyed this chapter so far. xD

You had be somewhere between two and six, definitely. You made this pairing so totally believable that it is amazing, superb work. You have talent, DeidreFoxington, serious talent! I absolutely positively loved this, and it was such a joy to read, completely blievable, something that I really actually want to happen in the anime, even though it never will. :,( SO BEAUITFUL!

Honestly, I first read this for the novelty of the pairing. But this was a sweet read. It was depressing and heart-warming at the same time to see time passing by and knowing that they would never be together together.

I loved this pieces. You did a great job in putting a lot into it while keeping it short and enjoyable. I love your characterization of Kisame, excellently done. The end brought me to tears but really there is no other way to end it. Excellent job. :)