Hehee! Very amazing story!! =)
Beautifully written and expressed, and a great ending as well. Love the fact of the "outer influence" bit near the end.
Great job!!
xoxo

i love happy endings.

Awesome story!

"some outside influence" "Carson smiled." Aw. I loved that! Great job. :)

If only it would happen this way . . . this is great. And I think you should explore the alliance. ;)

E!CARSON!

I loved it.

I really do hope that Elizabeth comes back in the end of SGA's run.

woah, *carson* smiled?? huh. nice. very nice. i loved it. loved it a lot. and it felt very in character too.

You really made me cry it was just so sad as John met Carson and Elizabeth and the scene on that balcony. *sniff*
Awesome story can't wait for the next part.

Arghh, I want the next part! *stares at screen expectantly*

You already know my opinion on this but I'm going to give it you again... AWESOME!

I love how in character everyone is and how right the alternate reality is. Poor John, now he's kicking himself for not going after Elizabeth but at least now he has hope and so do I. I really hope he finds her in his reality too!

Fantastic and I can't wait for the next part!

Hannah

Love this! Thanks for sharing

"which had thankfully convinced himself, not to shoot himself." Lol. I liked that line.
Aww. Poor John. That's so sad. I really hope that Elizabeth is at those coordinates!

That was awsome. I can't wait to go read more of these stories!! Keep up the great writting!

Love this fic! Nicely done - I look forward to the next chapter!

'which had thankfully convinced himself, not to shoot himself.'
LOL loved that line.
but so sad...im close to crying damnit after Elizabeth told him the other him came for her.
this was interesting, i loved it. even though its heartwrenching i have hope for the next chapter! i cant wait for tomorrow :)

Wow I can't wait for the next part! You have me glued to my seat!