Totally that was awesome but you should try to make longer chappies.

Risika

you should write more of this story. it seems like it has a real good start.

WHEEEEEEEEEEE! Wonderful, no da! CONTINUE! You finally got this up after talking about it for months so you better keep writing! Please? _ Mina

Yuki is a girl's name.

Yuki is a girl's name.

see!i finally read your story. after all that bugging i did read it. happy? good. it was good. like it very much, but lot out for run-ons.

um, strange but intriguing