 MissCar 2009-10-30 . chapter 9Absolutely love this chapter.
I can't wait to read the next installment. |
 MissCar 2009-09-07 . chapter 8I'm glad Val finally got what she deserved.
It was good to see Charles using his skills for good.
I hope he stays healthy
I also want to say that this story inspired me do my own college based story but in a completely different fan universe |
 amorveritas 2009-06-27 . chapter 7Another great chapter. I'm always looking forward to the next. Keep up the excellent work. |
 a440 2009-05-25 . chapter 6I've seen better stories than that. |
 TheLon3Wolf8986 2009-05-07 . chapter 6I always love your Daria Stories and I continue to look forward to them. Please Keep them Coming. |
 BlueMonkeyCircus 2009-03-05 . chapter 5I don't know if I've reviewed your stories yet, but I have been following them closely. You're a great writer, but this chapter just blew all the others out of the water. Enough predictability that the surprises were that much better. And I even got a little teary eyed. Fantastic work. Kudos! |
 seebear 2008-10-04 . chapter 3Ooh, that was a great ending with Helen and Eric, and I also really liked the Sandi/Quinn friendship throughout the chapter. This was a great update! |
 respitechristopher 2008-10-04 . chapter 3Excellent chapter. I had read the other sixty or seventy chapters a couple of months ago, so I'm glad to see a new one. Caught a preview of this over at PPMB, but it's so much easier to read in this format here.
Sandi's character is interesting. She's been so beaten down by what happened with her mother that her self-esteem is nearly at Stacy levels. You've captured the "fall from grace" mood around her very nicely. She might find Malibu a bit pricey for a new-start kind of place, by SoCal is definitely the way to go.
Both the wedding dress(es, actually) and the Bar Association job were lovely plot devices, and so in tune with the characters.
Always nice to see an update, and I'll be looking for them here and on PPMB. |
 RLobinske 2008-08-13 . chapter 2My apologies for the formatting errors on the first posting of "Broken Star".
For some reason, the upload process messed up the formatting in the submitted html file and I failed to double-check after the upload. |
 nabikineum 2008-08-12 . chapter 2Another great chapter... I liked the friends pulling together and the acknowledgement of Jane and Daria growing somewhat apart.
On the other hand, the format/typoes aspect was unusually rough for you. Problems? The first few paragraphs made me wonder if someone had hijacked your account, they were so rough.
Thanks for putting more essentially great work out there. You're one of my favorite Daria fanficcers-- and, really, fan fic authors in general. |
 seebear 2008-08-11 . chapter 1Oh wow, I really like Daria's new job, the office politics and people are wonderfully depicted. And that's nice how Clarice is moving on.
As a side note, I wasn't logged in when I read this, and I don't know if you're aware of it, but the fic isn't allowing anonymous reviews. |
 Dark Kuno 2008-07-30 . chapter 1I stumbled across the Falling Into College series on an honest accident and am quite glad I did.
I am honestly sad that I have read all of it to date but I eagerly await the next installment.
It is without a doubt one of the best pieces of fiction I have read in a very very long time.
You've allowed the characters to grow and change while still retaining the core of their identities.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work. |
 TheLon3Wolf8986 2008-06-28 . chapter 1sorry, i hadn't had time to review, but im doing it now, it was nice, you obviously have talent and imagination to continue this great series. please keep writting thisand john lane, they are both my favorite darias fanfics, bye |
 The Coffee Guru 2008-06-22 . chapter 1An excellent continuation to a long running series. It takes a little while for the story to find the same voice as before, possibly due to the time elapsed since regular updates. Nevertheless dialog, description and characterization were all what I've come to expect from this author: outstanding. |