 Sarah 2009-11-01 . chapter 11 A wonderfully well written story... Wished it had been a lil longer... Other than that, it was perfect... |
 pagelupin 2009-05-16 . chapter 11This story was very well written and I just loved it. ^_^ |
 BlueSparx 2009-03-15 . chapter 11Amazing! Loved this. It was just so wonderful to read. I think you got Zuko just right.
Can't wait to read some more from you!
Katy |
 Dancing Water 2009-03-01 . chapter 7This chapter was exciting especially with the note and the locked door. |
 Dancing Water 2009-03-01 . chapter 6NO, Zuko don't be like that! Oh, it gets sadder and sadder. Each chapter is killing me! |
 Dancing Water 2009-03-01 . chapter 5Aw man, Sokka didn't know? This story's so good! |
 Dancing Water 2009-03-01 . chapter 4Come on! Who is the father? Who poisoned her? Is it a character from the show? It's not one of the gaang is it? Iroh couldn't and wouldn't do it. Mai? Azula? Ty lee's too nice. |
 Dancing Water 2009-03-01 . chapter 3oh man, this fic is dark! seriously, who's the father? i need to know! |
 Dancing Water 2009-02-28 . chapter 2Did she really wake up? Or was it just an illusion like your title says? Oh, this story will be the death of me. |
 Dancing Water 2009-02-28 . chapter 1Why haven't I read this sooner? It sounds so interesting! Who poisoned her? Who's the father? Will she live? Will the baby? Please don't kill the baby! Or Katara! |
 pink-pretty-princess- 2009-01-06 . chapter 11I LOVED IT!Itwaz realy good |
 Gilraen Narmolanya 2008-11-29 . chapter 11Adorableness... I love it... :) |
 Artemis of the Ice 2008-11-07 . chapter 11So delicate & beautiful it tore at my heartstrings. Rendered very masterfully; amazing writing. |
 K-naille 2008-10-30 . chapter 11I found this story really good. The forst chapter are maybe a little too introspective, but it let itself be read ^^
It fun how Aang seems to vanish in many Zutara fic. Sometimes it's weird, but in your fic it's okay. The Avatar just isn't there. Okay.
Bref, I liked to read it. |
 the amber dragonfly 2008-08-17 . chapter 11OH THE FABULOUSNESS! -applause- That was SO well written, I just can't stop gushing about it. Beautifully written and full of all the warm fuzzies we all need. GREAT JOB! |