 Oozaru Angel 5/2/05 . chapter 1Very good! I like it! Keep up the good work!
~Oozaru Angel~ |
 vbchickVLVR 8/4/03 . chapter 1LOL. Cute. |
 vixen6 4/1/02 . chapter 1That was really cute and well written. All the characterizations were right on, especially Vegeta's. ^_^ |
 Mizutaka 3/21/02 . chapter 1Nice, very nice! I see you got some negetive comments, just ignore them, your fic was well done! I like your writing style, it's spunky! ^.^ Keep up the good work! |
 Usako-chan 3/21/02 . chapter 1Great Job! ^_^ I love Vegeta/Bulma fics! Are you going to write more? I hope so. The situations you put them in were hilarious at times. I can easily picture them flirting and trying to get on each other's nerves. keep up the good work! |
 BiZkiT 10/19/01 . chapter 1 try writing lemons...they'll make the whole thing better. |
 rachael 10/18/01 . chapter 1 awsome great I loved it please continue |
 Diamond Girl 10/17/01 . chapter 1 Vegeta is adorable, yet in character. I love it. Please continue. |
 The Artistic One 10/17/01 . chapter 1not bad! Very good actually! I like it! Keep writing! |
 Soulfire 10/12/01 . chapter 1I loved the ending! Great job! ;) |
 V.J 10/12/01 . chapter 1 A NICE TAKE ON HOW THE GOT TOGETHER A LITTLE DIFFERENT AND THATS GOOD! |
 Darke Angelus 10/12/01 . chapter 1Well...I wouldn't quite call this story 'realistic' but it was a reasonably good effort on the relationship angle and a little better explained then most. Keep up the good work! |
 setsuna 10/12/01 . chapter 1 hehe i loved that is was so good please write more |
 Chibi Mars 10/12/01 . chapter 1COOL! This was great! This is the kind of way I picture it happing and I'm glad someone, besides me, is tired of seeing Veggie OOC. Good job! |
 Deadly Beauty1 10/12/01 . chapter 1i'm sorry...i don't like it...this is fanFICTION you know...it doesn't have to be realistic...i read almost every bv fic and i know a little bit of fiction won't harm any1...sorry..i write bv fics myself...if only i knew how 2 update them! sorry... |