Very good! I like it! Keep up the good work!

Oozaru Angel

LOL. Cute.

That was really cute and well written. All the characterizations were right on, especially Vegeta's. _

Nice, very nice! I see you got some negetive comments, just ignore them, your fic was well done! I like your writing style, it's spunky! . Keep up the good work!

Great Job! _ I love Vegeta/Bulma fics! Are you going to write more? I hope so. The situations you put them in were hilarious at times. I can easily picture them flirting and trying to get on each other's nerves. keep up the good work!

try writing lemons...they'll make the whole thing better.

awsome great I loved it please continue

Vegeta is adorable, yet in character. I love it. Please continue.

not bad! Very good actually! I like it! Keep writing!

I loved the ending! Great job! ;)

A NICE TAKE ON HOW THE GOT TOGETHER A LITTLE DIFFERENT AND THATS GOOD!

Well...I wouldn't quite call this story 'realistic' but it was a reasonably good effort on the relationship angle and a little better explained then most. Keep up the good work!

hehe i loved that is was so good please write more

COOL! This was great! This is the kind of way I picture it happing and I'm glad someone, besides me, is tired of seeing Veggie OOC. Good job!

i'm sorry...i don't like it...this is fanFICTION you know...it doesn't have to be realistic...i read almost every bv fic and i know a little bit of fiction won't harm any1...sorry..i write bv fics myself...if only i knew how 2 update them! sorry...