This was a great story. Some of the characterization was our of character but you still did it in a believable and simple way. Well done on both this and the first in this series. Keep it up

i liked this chapter its very touching ok well cool storys i read all of them cya

okay sappy is officially a good thing!

Lol this was absolutely great and amazing ;D I loved it !!.
It was funny and sad and of course Dasey ;D Good job

Jeez, evil George sucks lol. I don't really understand why he hates Derek but it was still interesting. The end was cute and the Mitch/Pansy thing was hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing when Paul kept messing up his name. Anyways, great work.

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LOVED IT UPDATE SOON

aww, yes my friend that was very cheesy. i liked this story, it was different yet a nice change. thanks for writing it because i enjoyed reading it!

Love,
Baby

The only time I ever heard the chapter title song was in "Spiderman 2", haha. Well, in any case, great story. Poor George (the real one). The fictional one gave him a bad name, tear tear. Poor Nora (fictional). Wait a second, they're all fictional! O.o

Never mind. Great story nonetheless. But couldn't Derek have bought the house, or at least Nora have given it to him? It would have been a good place for him and Casey to start a family.

Well, see ya around anyways. Hopefully soon you'll write some more Daseys! =)

That was really good, i like it. Keep up the good work.

LOL! please update! :D poor derek :( hes so bottled up with emotions. I HOPE George doesnt get parolled (s/p?) >:(.

LOVED IT UPDATE SOON

Another nice update. I loved it. Can't wait to see what happens next...Update soon!

Is it something like Vertical Horizon-Everything You Want

Nice update. I am glad Dereks ok. I can't wait to see what happens next...Update soon!

lol, nice plea :) I swear I was SOO scared when George was beating up Derek! :/ poor Marti AND Nora :( NOW I say that Casey should move in with Derk! YAY! A- wait...crap but someone has to be there for Nora...oh well...anyway.. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

ROFLMAO Low, girl, using the characters to ask for a review. I dunno what to say otherwise, poor Nora. I never like the idea of violent George, 'cause it's sort of unbelievable to me, 'cause John Ralston just looks so harmless. Now, I can believe a violent Stuart (the Harrison girls' father from the show "Instant Star"), but George, not really.

Well, in any case, poor Nora.