hahaha, omg i loved it!

lol loved it :)



laughing the whole way throught it :) i sware

Well done:))

That was bloody brilliant. I love everything about Charlie. That gave me a good laugh. This was verry well written. Sawyer and Kate were perfectly in character. Great job :)

LOL you should write a companion peice to it! Sawyer and Charlie compare their sizes. . . .

lol at the Sawyer/Charlie comparison :)
i liked it, nice job!

Hey. Really funny, I liked it, it's nice to read something entertaining for once instead of all the dramas, lol.
So thank you!
Sara.

LOL! hilariously little conversation here! :P
loved these few lines:

"It's not my fault Gimminy Cricket likes to skinny dip! How was I supposed to know the elf would be naked?!"
"So, your eyes just wandered down there right away, huh?" Questioned Kate, giggling.
"Wha-No! No, that's not what happened!" - LMAO! poor guy... he rarely gets embarrassed but here... oh dear!

great oneshot!
bonboni
~X~

I hate Sawyer/Kate with a fierce and burning passion, but this was really cute! It was a bit OOC, especially Kate, but I thought you did Sawyer really well. And I liked the bit about Charlie. It was pretty funny!

OH
MY
GOD.

You had Sawyer and Kate perfect. I LOVED it, I could not stop giggling! =P

'Sawyer dragged her away before she could finish her sentence, leaving a very confused looking Jack behind. "I don't think, so, missy. Do that and you'll get punished." Sawyer murmured in her ear huskily.'

^ That was great, I can imagine exactly what it'd be like on the show... and it gave me tingles lol!

Keep up the great work!

~Star x

lol that was good! :)

x

YAY! omgg. how cute was that?! i loved it!

When he didn't give her one, she immediately knew he hadn't been listening.
"Sawyer!" - LOL.

"Sawyer! For God's sake, you've got the memory of a golfish! Well, who would you sleep with if we weren't together?"- lmao! and he said Claire! aha. they actually would be kinda cute togetherr ;)

"Oh, alright. After Jack I would do Charlie."
"Charlie?! You would do the midget?!"- LOL! OMG! ahaha. thats so cute! xD

"Claire told me he's got a HUGE d-"
"Enough, enough!" Sawyer had jumped up and was waving his arms around in panic. "Stop already! I don't want to hear it!"- LMAO.omgg, ahaha xD sawyer's all insecuree! ;) LOL.

LOL. i loved it, babe! its been ages since i've actually read a cute funny lightheart skate fic, and that was so cute! it was kinda like a season 1 feel! :)
great fic, so cutee! :D
xox katie

THAT WAS HILARIOUS!

"It's not my fault Gimminy Cricket likes to skinny dip! How was I supposed to know the elf would be naked?!"

I fell out of my seat laughing on the ground!

I want more stories!!